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Friends, the Barmaid and I

I was not a drinker, I must confess. Well, once in a while I would transgress. A studying student perched on the stool Avoided eye contact and men's lusty drool. One quiet afternoon visiting the barmaid, No one was in the club to cause a tirade. Three drunks came in for a mid-day drink. They put up cash; their coins made a clink. I started to leave, but she asked me to stay. New comers to the bar, first time, that day. Partially smashed, they started to glare. I could hardly bear their shameless stare. I sat at the counter drinking my water. Before too long, those three became brasher. Buy her a drink; No, thank you, I said. If eyes could kill, I would have been dead. A bit unruly, they became quite insistent. I ordered my usual; they happily gave payment. Three glasses of water I drank that day. We played pool when they went on their way. © October 30, 2011 Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest: Confessions to a Bartender Sponsored by: Natalie :) The Rogue Rhymer

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Date: 11/7/2011 5:45:00 AM
A belated congratulations I am sending you this morning for your win in Natalie's contest Dane-Ann. Love, Carol
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 11/8/2011 2:55:00 PM
Thank you for reading my work and for sending your congratulations. Smiles.
Date: 11/5/2011 10:42:00 PM
DANE;-) CONGRATULATIONS, ON YOUR WIN~ Have a wonderful weekend, GOD BLESS,..p.d.
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Date: 11/8/2011 2:55:00 PM
Thank you for reading my work and for sending your congratulations. Smiles.
Date: 11/4/2011 2:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the Bartender contest Dane Ann
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 11/8/2011 2:56:00 PM
Thank you for reading my work and for sending your congratulations. Smiles.
Date: 11/4/2011 1:21:00 PM
I'm wondering if this is a true story, dear friend. It sounds so much like the real you. Congratulations on your win in Natalie's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 11/8/2011 2:56:00 PM
Thank you for reading my work and for sending your congratulations. Smiles. (I'll never tell!...okay. It happened!)
Date: 11/4/2011 11:42:00 AM
Dane-I liked the 'different' perspective :) here-Many congrats. on your win in my contest!
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 11/8/2011 2:57:00 PM
Thank you for reading my work and for sending your congratulations. It is a little different than usual, but time matures us...hopefully. Smiles.
Date: 11/4/2011 10:06:00 AM
Congrats Dane Ann for another brilliant win for this creative write for the bartender contest luv..
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 11/8/2011 2:57:00 PM
Thank you for reading my work and for sending your congratulations. Smiles.

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