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fresh peaches

Broken fruit stacked forward, with
their tender lip-soft skins 
scuffed among her unspoiled sisters.

Lonely is the unripe peach
hoping to be chosen,
turning her sun side out, beckoning, 
longing to be washed and tasted, and
not knowing of her immature bitterness.

They always reach back 
for the fresh loaf of bread 
at the back of the shelf.

its not the same for fruit.

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  1. Date: 11/30/2008 5:27:00 AM
    Rickie - Congratulations on your 3 poems making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John

  1. Date: 11/1/2008 7:03:00 PM
    Rackie - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless

  1. Date: 10/28/2008 10:21:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/26/2008 4:36:00 PM
    This is fantastic, Rickie and a well-deserved selection for the semi-finals in the PoetrySoup contest where you have THREE (!!) writes chosen. WOW ... good luck to you and I hope to read more of your writes soon!!

  1. Date: 10/4/2008 6:40:00 AM
    Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/24/2008 6:31:00 AM
    Congratulations Rickie on the refeaturing of "Fresh Peaches." Vince

  1. Date: 9/22/2008 6:19:00 AM
    Congratulations Rickie on your enjoyable peachy poem being featured once again! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 7/9/2008 7:36:00 PM
    Nice Rickie, I always like to read your poetry.

  1. Date: 7/9/2008 11:31:00 AM
    Interesting perspective in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured this week. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 7/9/2008 8:49:00 AM
    Hello Rickie Congrats on this darling feature write this week! Love peaches! Enjoyed much. Love Light Truth Patricia

  1. Date: 7/9/2008 4:19:00 AM
    Rickie, congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/8/2008 9:15:00 AM
    Congrats on having fresh peaches featured this week

  1. Date: 7/7/2008 7:53:00 AM
    Congratulations Rickie on "Fresh Peaches" being featured. Now I'll feel guilty when I reach wy in the back for the fresh bread. Have a great day! Vince

  1. Date: 7/6/2008 7:09:00 PM
    Congratulations on being featured this week. Wonderful insight. Well done. Regards Heidie

  1. Date: 7/6/2008 6:08:00 PM
    Congratulations Rickie on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Truly enjoyed. Love, Shar