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Freeze Tag Players - Mosquito Treats

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Freeze Tag Players - Mosquito Treats

I was frozen in place when
I felt it “bite me” – a nip
On my neck from a pesky
Mosquito – oh no!

I couldn’t move to kill it,
So I stayed still.  But cringed when   
I saw the mosquito land 
On Deborah’s nose!

Susan Burch
For Linda's "Bite Me" contest
Bit Deborah Burch

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  1. Date: 5/16/2012 4:56:00 PM

  1. Date: 5/9/2012 12:35:00 PM
    I am trying to catch up some on my thank you's to all the wonderful poets who have left kind comments on my writings. I thank you so much for your words of kindness Susan. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope you are having a wonderful day. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/17/2012 9:34:00 AM
    You mean you just sat there?..Did nothing?...Poor Deborah and her swollen nose! ha ha...Great fun this one is, Susan..belated congrats also....They'll be no biting off your toes regarding my Pearl Poem...but I will be glad to split a cheeseburger with ya! ha ha...You cracked me up as I read your comments. Crazy gal! :) Gwendolen

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 10:49:00 PM
    Congrats on your win Susan! So funny that it landed on Deborah's nose and she inhaled it. Too cute! Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 12:08:00 PM
    Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Linda-Marie's "Bite Me" contest Susan. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 10:46:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your work..Good luck in the contest if it hasn't been judged yet..Reads like a winner to me..Sara

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 7:13:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's Contest, Susan! Ruben.

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 9:13:00 PM
    I hope Deborah slapped it. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 8:58:00 PM
    Again, I love how you ended yours Susan. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 8:19:00 PM
    lol...Congratulations Susan on your win!! big hugs,love deb

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 7:43:00 PM
    congrats Susan on sweet success for this super duper entry luv.. many thankxx..

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 6:42:00 AM
    Hey, susan. How are you? I have been up since 3 a.m now and it's nearly 7. Good grief. I spent so much time in hotmail I am still not done in SOup!! SOon I have to go tutor my Brazilian lady!

  1. Date: 4/9/2012 2:14:00 PM
    LOL!! too funny Cuz!! ;) lets see what I can do with that pesky raschell!!! love debs

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 4/9/2012 3:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    BTW *raschell* is city spelling for ;)
  1. Date: 4/9/2012 9:00:00 AM
    Hahaha! This is so cute, how you ended this, Susan :D those mosquitoes sure seem to be having a fiesta :D they'r biting everybody!

  1. Date: 4/7/2012 11:19:00 PM
    Susan, love it... good luck in the contest.. have yourself a wonderful and Happy Easter, good night~ PD

  1. Date: 4/7/2012 9:02:00 PM
    hahaha, I LOVE how you ended it with Deborah's nose. Delightful, Susan. I'm glad you "got 'er done"