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Franks 

Ketchup
mustard
onions.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010
foodhaiku

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Dale Kruper
Date: 9/15/2010 8:40:00 PM
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yummy..great job
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Rhonda Hero Aka Hero-Wilson
Date: 7/8/2010 7:55:00 PM
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Made me Hungry,,,,,Congrats on this being featured
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Doris Culverhouse
Date: 7/6/2010 7:32:00 AM
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great poem, congrats on the feature this week enjoyed reading today!!
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 7/6/2010 3:29:00 AM
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Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Derrick. May you have many more features. Love,Carol
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Adeleke Adeite
Date: 7/5/2010 11:16:00 AM
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well, i guess you need to go through the forms of poems so you could write exactly what is required!
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Adeleke Adeite
Date: 7/5/2010 10:59:00 AM
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Congrats Derrick, on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup homepage this week, you are such a great talent! keep up the great writes, and enjoy the honor. Love, Adeleke
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Gert W. Knop
Date: 7/5/2010 7:28:00 AM
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Mouthwatering although I prefer curry with the ketchup! But a Haiku should have the pattern 5/7/5, a Tanka 5/7/5/7/7 in number of syllables. Enjoyed your write and keep writing!! Thank you for your welcome comment on "Fragile"! Have a nice week...Gert
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Diiamond Rich
Date: 7/4/2010 9:57:00 AM
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Loved this piece here.. I'm new so have mercy and I hope you have an open mind my styles pretty different. Enjoy ya day
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 7/4/2010 8:53:00 AM
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Big smiles, Derrick. Hot dogs are always on my Fourth of July menu! Have a great holiday. Love, Carolyn
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 7/4/2010 6:14:00 AM
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Thanks for the comment. Please re-read my poem. It is not the scent of the hair but on the shirt.
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 7/3/2010 6:52:00 PM
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Are you sure about it to be in a haiku form? Of course you have used very fine images
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/3/2010 4:47:00 PM
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Got a chuckle..Keep the creative pen flowing.Sara
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