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~ orange leaf memory falls with possibility held for a moment softly kicked upon the wind in dream of Autumn's dawning... ~ _______

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/9/2012 8:57:00 PM

yet another gem from you I am seeing tonight . Congrats in this contest finally that got judged.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/7/2012 2:41:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this very expressive work..Congrats on your win..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/7/2012 12:41:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the "Enchantment of Fall" contest ^Rick. Love, Carol

Constance La France

Date: 10/23/2010 3:25:00 PM

I love this tanka, I can almost feel the crisp cool air, so beautiful, best of luck in the contest ~~ ps very happy you like your certificate ~~

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/13/2010 9:13:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your beautiful poetry this beautiful morning Rick and the best to you in the contest. May your day be full of inspiration. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/12/2010 12:55:00 PM

Lovely entry Rick.. good luck in Amy's contest with thhis cool Autumn piece.. enjoyable and visual too..my friend...

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/12/2010 11:50:00 AM

beautiful serene piece, good luck in the contest if its for that