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Fragment

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Fragment

Staring in disbelief
Heart thumping
Pulse racing
Trying to speak
But unable to make a sound
Wondering if I am dreaming
It cannot be reality…
…Surely
Why me?
Why not me?
 No, there must be some mistake
I recall my past
Happiness and heartbreak
Life will never be the same again
I find my voice and shout:
‘YES!’

*I got pretty excited to win a tenner on the lottery, LOL

For Constance’s Fragment contest, 6th September

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  1. Date: 12/4/2013 4:44:00 PM
    Really Jack shouldn't that be tenor by the way.? I know i suppose i'd better not add anything on or you might get too exited indeed; there would be Loose notes everywhere; thanks for the last comment much apprieciated..' Joe..)

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 10:15:00 PM
    congratulations Jack. Love ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 10:19:00 PM
    Jack, Congrats on your "Fragment" winning poem. xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 4:49:00 AM
    congrats on placing Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 4:27:00 PM
    Well done!

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 11:43:00 PM
    brilliant way to interpret this contest. Gosh, I hope I can think of something for this one too. My mind is just stymied.

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 4:05:00 PM
    very good poem Jack gl in contest Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 2:47:00 PM
    This is a wonderful and hilarious write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What a glorious piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 2:46:00 PM
    I can feel your excitement on this poem. Good luck in the contest. love phyl

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 2:45:00 PM
    Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by..Sara