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Staring in disbelief Heart thumping Pulse racing Trying to speak But unable to make a sound Wondering if I am dreaming It cannot be reality… …Surely Why me? Why not me? No, there must be some mistake I recall my past Happiness and heartbreak Life will never be the same again I find my voice and shout: ‘YES!’ *I got pretty excited to win a tenner on the lottery, LOL For Constance’s Fragment contest, 6th September

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Date: 12/4/2013 4:44:00 PM
Really Jack shouldn't that be tenor by the way.? I know i suppose i'd better not add anything on or you might get too exited indeed; there would be Loose notes everywhere; thanks for the last comment much apprieciated..' Joe..)
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Date: 9/23/2013 10:15:00 PM
congratulations Jack. Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/20/2013 10:19:00 PM
Jack, Congrats on your "Fragment" winning poem. xox~ LINDA
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Date: 9/17/2013 4:49:00 AM
congrats on placing Shadow x smiles
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Date: 9/16/2013 4:27:00 PM
Well done!
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Date: 9/6/2013 11:43:00 PM
brilliant way to interpret this contest. Gosh, I hope I can think of something for this one too. My mind is just stymied.
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Date: 9/6/2013 4:05:00 PM
very good poem Jack gl in contest Shadow x smile
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Date: 9/6/2013 2:47:00 PM
This is a wonderful and hilarious write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What a glorious piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/6/2013 2:46:00 PM
I can feel your excitement on this poem. Good luck in the contest. love phyl
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Date: 9/6/2013 2:45:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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