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Night Visions

Twilight graveyard, solemn shadows Shadow's tombstones, lined in silence Silence, broken by cries of grief Grief for the departed, love lost. Written on 6/6/2015

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Kp Nunez

Date: 6/9/2015 9:24:00 AM

Ah, but this is beautiful! I need not see the visual to imagine the scene. Loved it Laura! Blessings for the contest! hugs! :-)

Laura Leiser
Date: 6/12/2015 8:09:00 PM

Thank you, Kim! I appreciate your kind words and stopping by :)

Viv Wigley

Date: 6/8/2015 12:41:00 AM

Tricky to do a visual justice in four lines, but you've pulled it off. Well done, Laura, and good luck. Viv x

Laura Leiser
Date: 6/12/2015 8:08:00 PM

Thank you, Viv! Your kind words always encourage me :)

Mark Trichet

Date: 6/7/2015 5:43:00 PM

Wow Laura, you have captured the essence of your visual beautifully here. Loved it and GL

Laura Leiser
Date: 6/7/2015 6:17:00 PM

Thank you, Mark, for you kind and generous comments :)

Paul Callus

Date: 6/7/2015 1:29:00 PM

Love lost in the cold, shadowy imagery. Sad, but expressive. gl in the contest. // paul

Laura Leiser
Date: 6/7/2015 2:36:00 PM

Thank you for stopping by, Paul. I really appreciate your comments, too :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/7/2015 9:10:00 AM

Chilling and beautiful, wonderfully presented!

Laura Leiser
Date: 6/7/2015 2:35:00 PM

Thank you, Casarah! I'm glad you liked it :)

Judy Konos

Date: 6/6/2015 6:48:00 PM

Good one Laura....I enjoyed much

Laura Leiser
Date: 6/6/2015 6:55:00 PM

Thanks, Judy! I appreciate you stopping by to comment :)

Jan Allison

Date: 6/6/2015 2:54:00 PM

Lovely take on the visual Laura - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx

Laura Leiser
Date: 6/6/2015 4:26:00 PM

Thanks so much, Jan! I appreciate you kind comments :)