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Forgotten Valentine

A heart that was once only mine She had me within her coal eyes I gave her my love all the time I never held a deep disguise Now days I’m lost in the shuffle A heart that was once only mine Not an ounce of love does bustle Between the two of us in line She has forgotten me, the signs Are shown by the lack of our talk A heart that was once only mine I don’t see her now days, she walked She left long ago, hurting me Now a forgotten valentine I see just what’s left, memories A heart that was once only mine
Entrant into Debra Squyres's "The Forgotten Valentine..." contest 2/2/2013

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Date: 2/12/2013 10:47:00 AM
Belated congratulations on your win Russell xx
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Date: 2/11/2013 9:20:00 PM
Russell:-) ... Congratulations, with your awesome poem in Debra s "The Forgotten Valentine... " contest... glad to see you on the winning list. Always & Forever* PD
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Date: 2/11/2013 1:14:00 PM
Ahhh hah !!! It was you who wrote this.. Excellent !! Thanks for entering my first member's contest !! You are on the winners list !! Congratulations !!
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Date: 2/5/2013 10:49:00 AM
Hi there I am catching up on my reading now and liking what I see , lovely piece Russell though sad xx
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Date: 2/3/2013 2:22:00 PM
I love the way the line that repeats captures the reader. Very good to read your new poems today.
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Date: 2/3/2013 9:14:00 AM
way to do the contest theme, Russell. I think you have a winner.
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Date: 2/3/2013 3:02:00 AM
This is a very beautiful poem your wrote for the theme my dear friend, Russell! This is a winner for sure. Thank you so much for sharing and your precious time dropping by leaving me a wonderful comment in one of my poems. Good luck and wishing you all the best always! love/hugs, Leonora
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