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Forgiveness What is forgiveness? A state of mind that’s open- a heart that still cares. Hope to heal the pain; the wish to set back the clock, start over again. Tears that wash away bitterness in heart and mind- with understanding. Sandra M. Haight ~1st Place~ Contest: Forgiveness Senryu Contest Sponsor: Laura Loo Judged: 08/21/2016

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Date: 8/23/2016 12:45:00 PM
Yes, that's the essence of forgiveness.Congrats on 1st place Sandra!
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Date: 8/22/2016 3:34:00 PM
grreat take on the theme... best cheers on your high win!..huggs
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Date: 8/22/2016 2:27:00 PM
A 7 for this beautiful uplifting WNNING poem, Sandra! Janice
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Date: 8/22/2016 2:26:00 PM
A 7 for this beautiful uplifting WNNING poem, Sandra! Janice
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Date: 8/22/2016 2:11:00 AM
'Bitterness inside the heart washed away'. This is inspiring. Congratulations. Kai
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Date: 8/22/2016 2:10:00 AM
A wonderful set of senryu Sandra! Congratulations on your deserved first place! 7 ; )
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Date: 8/21/2016 1:50:00 PM
Congratulations on a lovely senryu. I'm glad other people chose rhyming too.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/21/2016 7:07:00 PM
Thank you, Janis, for your nice comment and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/21/2016 1:48:00 PM
Back to say congratulations Sandra, no surprise...
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/21/2016 7:07:00 PM
Thank you once again, Charlie, for all your nice visits and support. I appreciate it so much. Sandra
Date: 8/21/2016 12:11:00 PM
A beautiful definition Sandra, well done.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/21/2016 7:06:00 PM
Thank you so much, James. Sandra
Date: 8/21/2016 11:53:00 AM
So very perfect your poem, and the quote from Maya, just great, congrats on another worthy win!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/21/2016 7:06:00 PM
Thank you very much, John, for your nice visits and support. Much appreciated! Sandra
Date: 8/21/2016 10:32:00 AM
Sandra, sometimes we wonder what forgiveness really is. You explained it perfectly with a touching message...so beautiful lovely lady...congrats on your top win and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/21/2016 7:05:00 PM
Thank you, Laura, for another wonderful contest with an inspiring theme. I appreciate my nice placement very much! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/20/2016 9:19:00 PM
Beautiful! Good luck in the contest. Agnes
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/21/2016 7:04:00 PM
Thank you so much, Agnes. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/19/2016 4:04:00 PM
Thoughtfully written as it condenses and speaks well to true forgiveness. Best of luck in the contest. Peace, Love and Joy
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/21/2016 7:04:00 PM
Thank you very much, John, for your visit and supportive comments. Much appreciated! Sandra
Date: 8/19/2016 12:45:00 PM
Best wishes for a rewarding contest Sandra...
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/19/2016 3:15:00 PM
Thank you very much, Charlie. Much appreciated. Sandra
Date: 8/19/2016 11:54:00 AM
Nicely worded, Sandra -- but, it's seldom a mutual action. Initiated by one or the other (or neither).... ;-)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/19/2016 3:14:00 PM
Thank you for the nice comment, Tom. Yes...most times it's a one-way street, at least to get started. Sandra
Date: 8/19/2016 5:56:00 AM
What a way to describe forgiveness:) All the best:)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/19/2016 3:13:00 PM
Thank you, Jo. What is good about short forms like the Senryu is that sentiments have to be refined into just a few words. That can make the write more powerful. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/19/2016 4:14:00 AM
Now this is the way to forgive Sandra! How great to read your poetry tonight! ; ) 7
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/19/2016 3:12:00 PM
Thank you, Connie, for your much appreciated support! Hugs, Sandra

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