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Forgive - Four Lines Contest

She reads the name carved in the stone Stone cold as her heart, aching so, so many things she should forgive, forgive, so his soul, can go home
Four lines contest Penned by Seren Roberts on June 6th 2015 Using Visual 3

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/14/2015 3:14:00 PM
Congrats on the spot here Seren..'
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Date: 6/12/2015 7:45:00 PM
Seren, Congratulations on your 4 line win. Hugs SKAT
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Date: 6/12/2015 6:07:00 PM
I like this, Seren! Congrats on your win with this fantastic write! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/12/2015 3:14:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Seren:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/9/2015 5:36:00 PM
wow, seren. I am really loving the graveyard poems in this contest. Yours is a very good one!
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Date: 6/9/2015 4:44:00 AM
yes touching my heart too,,,,and i really love it..your are de best Seren.....
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Date: 6/8/2015 11:46:00 PM
Great write Seren.Its nice to stop by and read your stuff once more.
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Date: 6/8/2015 3:43:00 PM
Reads like a winner..Way to go forthe contest..Sara
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Date: 6/6/2015 6:47:00 PM
That's a WOW WOW ....WOW
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Date: 6/6/2015 2:50:00 PM
Brilliantly penned Seren I LOVE your interpretation of the visual - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/6/2015 2:36:00 PM
It is touching:)
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