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Forgive, the World Needs It

As the great man's note rightly says it Forgiveness is the attribute of the strong The weak can never indulge in it For, they are the ones to see always the world as wrong Yes, forgiveness implies that someone did someone wrong Someone did hurt someone else Someone did put on the dirty song Or someone did become an adverse Why, to be able to forgive, one needs to understand life Human nature rather, for being attracted always to making more than one gaffe It is in our nature to think only of our ego While basking others in unwanted sorrow Say, have you never ever erred Have you, from the right path, never strayed Have you not caused pain Have you not raised up your nose in unwanted disdain Pray, think of the wife of the unfaithful husband The one who forgot where are the limits of his borderland The one who did hurt By showing his love as being in distort Think of the child, capricious and selfish Always does he care only to have his share of the dish Never does he wonder about his parents Whether or not, he does push them into torments Think of the one who is so hurt that he has no other option None other than causing around him, great destruction Destruction like death Destruction like loss of faith Well, of all these, if one does repent I believe towards forgiveness he is bent Of all these, I believe that forgiveness is a merciful blessing One that does lead to a higher awakening I shall forgive indeed I shall forgive, for such does be my creed I shall forgive, Pray, come, love to the world, I am ready to give!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/22/2015 12:33:00 PM
lovely write on forgiveness congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/22/2015 9:15:00 AM
Well said... well written. What a beautiful creed !!! One that sees that none are perfect and with eyes of maturity finds it easier to forgive. Congrats on your placement in the contest... well deserved !!
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 2/22/2015 10:34:00 AM
Thk you so much :)
Date: 2/21/2015 10:26:00 PM
A.G.,, CONGRATS on your win ~ SKAT ~
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 2/22/2015 10:35:00 AM
Thks SKAT :)
Date: 2/21/2015 8:59:00 PM
nice win...PD
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 2/22/2015 10:35:00 AM
thks PD
Date: 2/21/2015 4:07:00 PM
Congratulations on the win
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 2/22/2015 10:35:00 AM
Thks :)
Date: 2/21/2015 1:50:00 PM
I like this poem, I also like that your name has almost half the alphabet in it. Congrats on both.
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 2/22/2015 10:37:00 AM
thks so much, for the placement and for the unique discovery of the uniqueness of my name :)) thks for both, indeed
Date: 2/16/2015 10:57:00 AM
I love how well u described the issue of forgiveness in your poem. Forgiving is one of those things that is hard to do, especially when a loved one hurts. Be blessed. 7++
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 2/22/2015 10:37:00 AM
Thks so much :)

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