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Forget Me - My Valentine

Bloody Valentine.. A blistering and heavy, passionate night The best Valentine's Day I had in years Every minute at that point felt right Until I heard him accidentally, call her name The way he kissed me, the way he came to me Made my skin crawl with envy! I shut my eyes and opened them to a darker light I pressed him away with rage Suddenly the love began to fade off into the night The flowers he gave me I trashed during the fight I end my day with nothing more to say Like a thief in the dark, my mind drove me insane The echoes in my headwear; calling out her name My sweet Valentine turned into a passion of crime The thought of his heart not wholly mine Put a tune on my obsession that I could not tolerate Deep pain then came the hate At last, ~ by morning light I woke up next to the man I love I found myself all covered up with his descent His guts where spread like a blanket all over my bed I reached and grabbed a rag and wiped off all his filth At last ~ I felt no longer blind I agreed to share what was on his lips I send his ex-wife half of his tenderness I believe he chose not to forget her, from the beginning... :-)

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Date: 3/1/2016 10:51:00 PM
Hmm. Very interesting. What a fantastic twist. I love it. Congrats on your win. Well done.
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Date: 2/28/2016 5:53:00 AM
Hello my loving sis-BFF Linda! Stopping by to first, CONGRATULATE you on your win and again to read and enjoy this very creative and wonderful Valentine poem of yours! Thank you so much again for sharing! Stopping by also to say Hi and thank you wholeheartedly for my win in your contest! I'm sorry for the late expression but I'm so grateful my loving sis! Many hugs! love and miss you, sis-BFF forever,Leonora
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Date: 2/25/2016 10:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/25/2016 9:07:00 PM
Completely different take... loved it. Congrats on your wonderful win. Hugs, Bobby
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Date: 2/25/2016 10:01:00 AM
Congrats on your win Linda!
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Date: 2/25/2016 7:25:00 AM
Hi Linda. Congrats for your wonderful WIN and placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 2/25/2016 7:04:00 AM
Congratulations Linda, a powerful piece.
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Date: 2/24/2016 4:10:00 AM
How lovely n unique Linda. no wonder a great win.. big congrats!
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Date: 2/23/2016 5:34:00 PM
Thanks for the win Daughter... : )
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Date: 2/23/2016 3:15:00 PM
twisted and dark valentines write congrats on your win Linda:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/23/2016 12:27:00 PM
Congratulation my *friend on your win. Loved always,bl
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Date: 2/23/2016 11:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning entry, Linda. He made a huge mistake by calling her name. He wanted it all, but you sent him away. It was a passionate night gone bad. I have loved reading it, although it has been a nightmare for you. Another great write from my admired poetess. Best Wishes and :), Andrew.
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Date: 2/23/2016 11:34:00 AM
Whew! Darkness at its best and most creative, Linda. Congrats on your well-deserved win! Janice
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Date: 2/23/2016 11:10:00 AM
Thank you for entering my contest mom it was an honor reading:)
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Date: 2/23/2016 5:35:00 PM
Thank you so much, Daughter... I snuck this one in because I wanted to see if I would even make your list... I was guilty when you asked me about this poem, and I denied it was mine... LOL, Love love ya. and thank you for the win. Mother am I
Date: 2/4/2016 11:06:00 PM
lol **SKAT**
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Date: 10/2/2014 7:17:00 PM
I am looking...
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Date: 4/4/2013 9:03:00 PM
OUCH! wOW, such a brilliantly crafted poem. The emotions expressed through these select few words is just so perfectly displayed. I felt the familiar, maddening burn of envy myself. You are such a passionate, expressive writer. I love reading your stuff! Always, Laura
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Date: 2/15/2013 4:46:00 AM
Beautiful piece,Pd..Congrats on your superb win..Great job...You are my star any day...Happy val`s day...Love Olu..
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Date: 2/14/2013 11:14:00 PM
Congratulations on a very fine win, PD! Fantastic write. Love, Annalise
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Date: 2/11/2013 6:16:00 PM
oh..ho..man...this is the sh*t, Linda. Your flare is something special. Congrats. Like I said...you cook the soup.
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Date: 2/11/2013 10:45:00 AM
yeah...me... love me... PD
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Date: 2/11/2013 10:25:00 AM
Hello my dearest sis! Congratulations on your awesome win on this stunning/very lovely Valentines poem. I think, I've missed this one before. I think it's the other Valentines poem of yours which I've read. I'm sorry but this one is so creative! Big congrats and hugs again! love always and forever, Leonora
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Date: 2/11/2013 6:14:00 AM
congrats on your win PD....love can leave your heart in pieces...
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Date: 2/11/2013 4:23:00 AM
Wow chills! Congrats on your win with this visceral piece.
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Date: 2/10/2013 8:34:00 PM
love your twisted valentine mind,congrats :-) SandyIvy
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