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Forever My Love

whispering dreams a beautiful love dances in anticipation a soft elegant breeze began to blow into the room I could see the hills climbing into the heavens as I gazed out my window the door to my room slowly creped opened she floated into the room as beautiful as an angel in flight she turned to me and said dim the lights my love light a candle of purity, a candle of two becoming one only the candle light lit her face, stunning and graceful she came close to me a loving embrace passion............ I held her through the long summer night I caressed her brown soft skin I touched her lips of silk our bodies together in endless love a night that still lives on in beauty a love that has endured through each storm my sweet bride my sweet love a life together divine.......

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Date: 7/30/2010 5:40:00 AM
Congratulations ^Rick on your win in Amy Green's contest "My Deepest Passion". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/29/2010 10:31:00 AM
beautiful, congrats on your win
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Date: 7/28/2010 6:24:00 PM
Congrats on the 3rd place win, Rick
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Date: 7/28/2010 5:38:00 PM
Congrats, Rick. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 7/28/2010 2:43:00 PM
Now there's a passion worth the endeavor! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 7/28/2010 2:23:00 PM
Beautiful write. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/28/2010 1:43:00 PM
Congrats Rick on your winning poem in the Deepest Passion contest...with this fantastic write and super win ... enjoy my friend.. another victory dance at the winners circle... with luv..
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Date: 7/28/2010 1:21:00 PM
Passion, love, eternal. What else could a woman ask for? Wonderful write, Rick. Congrats on your placement. So happy you entered this.
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Date: 7/20/2010 6:44:00 AM
Your poetry was a pleasure to read today Rick. Thank you for sharing it with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/19/2010 3:55:00 PM
What beautiful imagery and sentiments Rick.. this is quite awesome my friend.. enjoyed.. with luv..
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Date: 7/19/2010 12:51:00 PM
I love this! ~ Molly
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