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A Hound Dog Tale Premiere Contest Winner

As the story goes... A pesky fly, came buzzing by to rest and munch and eat his lunch and have some fun on the hound dog's nose. The old dog snoozed without a clue in the noontime heat of the August sun. He napped awhile by piles of leaves in dappled shade of the apple tree, where an apple fell and the flies said "yum" and the bees would hum and the dog would yawn. That lazy bone won't fetch a stick, or scratch his neck or care a lick about a neighbor's cat,... That ornery brat will prance around, will tease and taunt the weary hound, who naps so sound on this dog- day afternoon. Hound has no pep to take a step to chase or race that snooty cat, who smugly rubs against his back, and sticks her nose up to his snout, and sticks up her tail sashays about. He hardly cares that she is there. She preens and cleans her own black spots, She stares at him he stares right back, with one eye open, one eye shut He'll stretch a bit and scratch a lot but it's too hot to chase that cat... Don't bat your eyes.. it's not a lie. So what do you think of that? _________________________________

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/31/2016 3:50:00 PM
A delightful story poem! I can easily picture the scene in my mind. Congrats on your 1st place win with this sweet write, Carrie! Love, Kim
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Date: 5/25/2016 7:59:00 AM
Love your poem. Intend to read it to my grandson. Yes, must shape the up and coming generation. We've had collaborations. He is an avid cat lover and is 7 yrs old. Congratulations, Carrie!
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Date: 5/24/2016 1:07:00 PM
Hi, Carrie. Congratulations on you top win! I love your beautiful poem narrated in a playful and humorous way. The flow of words is consistent until the end. You have deserved this win with your superb talent. Hugs, Andrew.
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Date: 5/21/2016 7:21:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie, great win...
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Date: 5/21/2016 5:12:00 AM
Congrats, I thoroughly enjoyed this one.
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Date: 5/20/2016 2:00:00 PM
I loved it! Congrats on the great win!
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Date: 5/20/2016 12:46:00 PM
Pretty good, Carrie. I love it. Congrats. Deserves the top shelf.
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Date: 5/20/2016 10:47:00 AM
What a delightfully sweet and pleasant poem, Carrie! I love it! ~ Worthy of its first place in the contest...congratulations! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 5/20/2016 9:39:00 AM
Congrats on your beautiful first placement in the contest. Loved always my lovely friend, bl
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Date: 5/20/2016 9:09:00 AM
Congrats Carrie.
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Date: 5/20/2016 8:20:00 AM
Adorable, Carrie, and I liked the beat as I read it. Congratulations on your First Place win in the Poetry Soup contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/20/2016 1:50:00 AM
A fantastic win with this cute tale (tail) Carrie! ; ) congratulations on your super win! #7
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Date: 5/20/2016 1:32:00 AM
Wow congrats Carrie you topped the charts with this one:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/7/2015 6:57:00 PM
Oops, forgot to rate. Seven+ and fave list!
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Date: 8/7/2015 6:52:00 PM
Hahaha! I LOVE this! So comical and totally original. Congrats on your well deserved win, my Dear! xoxo
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Date: 8/6/2015 5:38:00 PM
Congrats on your win Carrie
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Date: 8/6/2015 10:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win a 7 , Carrie, I'm that lazy dog in this got weather. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/6/2015 5:47:00 AM
What a witty write Carrie - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/6/2015 1:02:00 AM
Carrie, Congrats on your Hot, hot win. Love SKAT
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Date: 8/5/2015 11:29:00 PM
Carrie loved ur sweet witty write, congrats on big win!
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Date: 8/5/2015 9:53:00 PM
Carrie, this one had me chuckling throughout. I have seen similar episodes of hot dogs and steamy cats annoying one another from shady shelter. Thanks for entering the contest.
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Date: 5/19/2013 9:39:00 PM
this is a nice poem, CONGRATS!! SKAT
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Date: 5/18/2013 8:35:00 PM
Congratulations with your impressive winning word play poem, CARRIE... Take Care <3 xox <3 LINDA
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Date: 5/18/2013 1:21:00 PM
Stunning! Congrats on your win Carrie. AO
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Date: 5/18/2013 8:08:00 AM
a fun write and read. congrats. randy
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