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L acking the common sense of a maggot O bviously attention starved as a child S orry excuse for a human being E merging from a place where dung was piled R ejected for a lack of talent S tuck in a self pity life beguiled

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/2/2012 9:21:00 PM
I saw plenty of those persons you describe above on a now-defunct poetry site. They had no idea what poetry was about, and they gave me low ratings for some of my best efforts.
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Date: 9/29/2011 12:29:00 PM
YES, a pile of Losers is what you describe in your poem. Why do they have to be maggots? Hope all is well with you and family. love phyl
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Date: 9/25/2011 10:14:00 AM
Sounds familiar. As an ex-teacher I can relate. Good to hear from you, Vince. Love, daver
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Date: 9/19/2011 5:23:00 PM
LOL, witty write, Vince - and thanks for your kind message. Hope your team's doing well (we don't hear the results over here)
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Date: 9/19/2011 7:12:00 AM
A very well penned poem. There is meaning in every line of the poem. Have a great day,Vince
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Date: 9/18/2011 6:33:00 PM
WOW! I know this person! Very well done.E.J.
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Date: 8/29/2011 9:13:00 PM
Wow! Very emotional write, well done; Jay oh, thanks for the recent comments on my work.
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Date: 8/28/2011 9:32:00 PM
love it, vince. TOo bad we can't drag him out into the open!!
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Date: 8/24/2011 7:25:00 PM
this is funny Vince. A very effective Acrostic! Lays it down right where it is and with humor. And thanks for the comment on Balloon payment. Much appreciated . He told Gadafi he should step down and relinquish power.... Some nerve. He' is the one who needs to step down but the media loves him and most people listen to the media like they were gods of a sort. Tsk tsk
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Date: 8/24/2011 4:23:00 PM
Good one..Got a good chuckle..Sara
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Date: 8/17/2011 10:10:00 AM
Very emotional write Vince...well penned...thanks for sharing...smiles..chiquita
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Date: 8/13/2011 11:10:00 AM
Yes, this site has been blighted by such low-life recently. A good, caustic write with real artistic merit too! Regards, Robert.
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Date: 8/12/2011 3:20:00 PM
Nice emtional write, Vince
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Date: 8/11/2011 11:22:00 PM
Is this what is going on with this site, Vince? Great rebuttal to the emotions out there. lol. Fun acrostic.......you're not ANGRY are you? ha. ha. Gwendolen
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