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This parchment holds your grip so right as tears of joy behold our days, and while the moon imprints this flight when a splendor of time replays beguiling nightfall's song, mid-air... unconditional I declare accepting you as is, so rare, till kisses waltz in gentle sways. For better or worse etched on sky this promise of life I cherish; that come fire and rain, we shall try for love's seasons not to perish, since years ahead has found true place... Dearest beloved, I embrace sweet thrill of life made from God’s grace; Forever is ours to relish. 2/ 02/2016 Contest of Mystic Rose A VALENTINE POEM OF YOUR CHOICE OLD OR NEW

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Date: 8/17/2014 2:48:00 AM
Hi nette, lovely,,,congratulations xx
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Date: 8/16/2014 5:01:00 PM
Really beautiful, Nette. "Till kisses waltz in gentle sways." Very nice. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/16/2014 2:47:00 PM
Congrats on the win Nette, a rather unique take on the theme.
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Date: 8/16/2014 2:26:00 PM
dropping back with my congratulations:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/16/2014 1:48:00 PM
Back wid huge congrats on ur awesome win Nette!
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Date: 7/30/2014 3:36:00 PM
Wow Nette....finding one's true place is what we all strive for and you expressed this so beautifully here. Hugs
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Date: 7/27/2014 9:50:00 AM
What can one say to this, a wondrous sentiment from a mind a personaity so sincere, so human, so tender...
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Date: 7/27/2014 1:56:00 AM
Excellent. Beautiful poem. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 7/26/2014 3:06:00 PM
Wonderful poem here Nette!Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 7/26/2014 1:14:00 AM
Finding someone who will accept us as is, is finding true love.... These tender words were so beautifully written and expressed, Nette! An excellent poem!.... This should do very well in Dan's contest. Good luck to you!
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Date: 7/25/2014 6:45:00 PM
Great work..Very expressive ....."that come fire and rain, we shall try for love's seasons not to perish"...We all hope that it will last when we find that special person some do and some don't..Sara
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Date: 7/25/2014 6:39:00 PM
You really excel here! God has made you who you are, and it needs no changing! Your poetry is like a love's soothing tune, Nette. A compliment to be mentioned in your last contest. Thanks a lot!
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Date: 7/25/2014 1:22:00 PM
Breathless! Who wouldn't want to be loved for just being who she really is? This radiant piece made me teary-eyed, Nette. Also, I'm glad my wayra poem made it. Thank you!
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Date: 7/25/2014 8:56:00 AM
Poetry to perfection Nette ! U hv an exceptional ability to play wid words my dear!
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Date: 7/25/2014 7:06:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, Nette - A promise is given - will never be broken - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/25/2014 5:35:00 AM
Simply stunning Nette - never lose your grip when you find the right one:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/25/2014 5:30:00 AM
Another Great Nette, beautifully done :)
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