Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership


Sabrina Huggins Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled FOOD FIGHT! which was written by poet Sabrina Huggins. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Sabrina Huggins

Best Sabrina Huggins Poems

+ Fav Poet


The cafeteria being as quiet as a library, was as weird as snow on the Fourth of July.
Not only was the cafeteria quiet but still as a desert.
But that didn't last long, like shattered rain showers, on a sunny day.
One scream of "FOOD FIGHT!", started chaos like bombing a war front.
Food was shoot across the room, like paint balls in a paint ball fight.
Food hit students, like heavy water balloons.
But everything ceased, soon as the principal stepped in, like a sergeant in the military.
Punishments were heavy as 3 tons.
And that's the tale of a food fight, severe as a massacre.

This is my first hyperbole.

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 8/3/2009 3:20:00 PM
    Aww thanks!!!

  1. Date: 7/31/2009 9:15:00 AM
    I would say your exaggeration for effect, had quite the effect you intended. I could see the mash potatoes, smash against someone's face. All comments welcome, and appreciated, Moses