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Food Fight!

The cafeteria being as quiet as a library, was as weird as snow on the Fourth of July. Not only was the cafeteria quiet but still as a desert. But that didn't last long, like shattered rain showers, on a sunny day. One scream of "FOOD FIGHT!", started chaos like bombing a war front. Food was shoot across the room, like paint balls in a paint ball fight. Food hit students, like heavy water balloons. But everything ceased, soon as the principal stepped in, like a sergeant in the military. Punishments were heavy as 3 tons. And that's the tale of a food fight, severe as a massacre. This is my first hyperbole.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/3/2009 3:20:00 PM
Aww thanks!!!
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Date: 7/31/2009 9:15:00 AM
I would say your exaggeration for effect, had quite the effect you intended. I could see the mash potatoes, smash against someone's face. All comments welcome, and appreciated, Moses
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