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Fly In the Soup - Repost

There is a fly in the soup that just won't leave.... He taunts and taunts but barely makes a breeze... Now there is a disruption at the table for those who write... Must take this fly outside for a one sided fight... Shoo fly shoo fly your day has come to an end... You pushed a few too many poets, but this one wouldn't bend...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/17/2012 8:01:00 PM
Michael..that is no spice... lol..hope the fly drowns.... xox..pd
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Date: 8/17/2012 7:42:00 PM
I LOVE IT!!! Now lets SWAT him for good... Cory
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Date: 8/17/2012 3:00:00 PM
Ha ha, this a wonderful poem my friend! I really enjoyed reading this creative piece this afternoon! What a special and tremendous piece Michael! Great Work!!
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Date: 8/17/2012 2:36:00 PM
Flies are so nasty,dirthy and very troblesome!!!! .....belong in cows ass !!!! - re- read it ....and will do it again....and again... - Thank you Michael. - oxox // Anne-Lise
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Date: 8/17/2012 2:23:00 PM
Yes its Michael the Leader of the Witch Hunt. See my blog and post your feelings.
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