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Fly Away - Waltz Wave

Fly birdie fly. Spread your wings and soar. The time has come to leave the nest, your destiny awaits. Fly birdie fly. Spread your wings, catch the wind and heed freedom's call. 6/21/15 Entered in Skat's Any Old Poem #9 contest

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 7/20/2015 12:43:00 AM

I like the inspiring message in this charming poem. Nicely written, Kim! Congrats on the win!

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/20/2015 4:49:00 PM

Thank you so much, Kelly!

Skat A

Date: 7/13/2015 12:20:00 AM

Kim, thank you for the support... SKAT

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/20/2015 4:48:00 PM

Thank you, Skat, for my placement in your contest!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/12/2015 12:38:00 AM

I love the way this one moves which is how I see the wave poem being. It's all about the movement and the beautiful words!

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/20/2015 4:48:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea! I appreciate your encouraging words!

Sneha Rv

Date: 6/28/2015 3:12:00 AM

This is really lovely!! I loved this!! :D :D

Kim Merryman
Date: 6/28/2015 3:24:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sneha!

Daver Austin

Date: 6/25/2015 1:33:00 PM

The rapture that comes with the dance takes wing, eh. Love, it. daver

Kim Merryman
Date: 6/28/2015 3:23:00 PM

Thank you, Daver! Appreciate the visit!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/22/2015 2:58:00 PM

this soars, kim... i like this form and am glad you cited my piece in your contest.. thanks and huggs!

Kim Merryman
Date: 6/24/2015 9:20:00 PM

Thank you, Nette! I appreciate you stopping by and commenting.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 6/21/2015 11:16:00 PM

A lovely, inspiring write, Kim! Hugs, Rhonda

Kim Merryman
Date: 6/24/2015 9:19:00 PM

Thank you, Rhonda! I appreciate your comments.

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/21/2015 3:15:00 PM

This is beautiful Kim. Its a joy to see the different forms you create. I love how you penned of a bird flying to its freedom. I used have flying dream often and can I recall the feeling being free(not a care in the world). Excellent job. Thanks for sharing:) Alexis

Kim Merryman
Date: 6/24/2015 9:17:00 PM

Thank you, Alexis! Actually I haven't personally created any forms myself. I find them on other poetry sites and try them out.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/21/2015 1:49:00 PM

I do like this simple form Kim - I see my son as a bird now he has gone to university he is free to spread his wings and fly:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Merryman
Date: 6/24/2015 9:12:00 PM

I'm glad you could relate to my poem, Jan. Thanks for stopping by and I appreciate your comment.

Leo Larry Amadore

Date: 6/21/2015 1:25:00 PM

In my childhood, I frequently fantasized that I could fly --- running, jumping into the air, I was airborne for a short time. And that was one of my favorite activities, especially after having seen a screening of the Peter Pan movie. I never wanted to grow up (and I'm still not sure I ever did.) I enjoyed your poem.

Kim Merryman
Date: 6/24/2015 9:10:00 PM

I think all kids are fascinated with flying. My husband doesn't want to grow up either. Thanks for stopping by and I'm glad you liked my poem.

Arabian Poet

Date: 6/21/2015 1:10:00 PM

Wonderful writing simple and meaningful at the same time

Kim Merryman
Date: 6/24/2015 9:05:00 PM

Thank you, Mofeed!