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Flowers

Kneeling upon a smile to touch the vine
Scentful seeping in blissful sensation
Leering beauty and plucking temptation
Just one piece of nature's heaven divine

Arose to steal a kiss from sunlight's ray
Like morning's dew upon a suffused glow
Facing the zephyr where the blossoms blow
Where pollens aflutter towards the bay

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Connie Gildersleeve Date: 7/27/2013 5:34:00 AM Poetically wonderful Ben. Congratulations on you fantastic win. Warm Smiles, Connie Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/25/2013 9:53:00 PM Hello Benjamin, the poem is hot and Awesome... sweet and pretty. congrats with your summer time poem...love Linda Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 7/25/2013 12:49:00 AM Congratulations on your winning spot Benjamin x x Login to Reply

Tim Ryerson Date: 7/24/2013 7:29:00 PM Congratulations Benjamin, fantastic write using a very difficult form and you pulled it off big time!...'Kneeling upon a smile'...WOW Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 7/24/2013 1:26:00 PM Congratulations David, a lovely gift of a poem. Thank you for the support my contest. Stop by and enjoy my blog: (A Lavender Day-- summer contest) winners. Have yourself an awesome day. LUV ~SKAT Login to Reply

Varsha Tomar Date: 7/24/2013 11:04:00 AM The second para is so mesmerizing...congratulations on your well deserved win!! Login to Reply

Laura Breidenthal Date: 7/14/2013 9:31:00 PM Way to describe the flowers. Pollens aflutter, I like that part. Reminds me of the birds and insects carrying along the scent far across the land. Like the use of personification as well. Excellent word choice once again. Always, Laura Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 3/28/2013 4:10:00 AM Congratulations on your win Benjamin xx Login to Reply Benjamin David Date: 5/2/2013 1:12:00 AM Thank you very much, Mandy, much appreciated.

Skat A Date: 3/27/2013 5:39:00 PM Benjamin, The New Poets of 2013, Congratulations in this contest. Hope to read more of your poems. Take Care*SKAT Login to Reply Benjamin David Date: 3/27/2013 5:44:00 PM Thank you so much, Skat, endearing words that sweeten my heart.

Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/24/2013 8:29:00 PM Benjamin, CONGRATULATIONS with the first poem you posted on the soup :-) it was an honor in hosting this contest for the New Poets of 2013. Thank you for the support. Please enjoy your winning poem. By the way, I posted a blog in honor of the poets who made the list of this contest. The blogs name ----> ""I got the answer :-) What is a poet?"" please check out the blog when you have time. It's a nice gesture from me to you ~ xox ~ LINDA Login to Reply Benjamin David Date: 3/25/2013 7:53:00 AM I am gracefully appreciative, thank you, Linda.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/17/2013 8:05:00 AM - Benjamin, you have posted a lovely poem, you write very well. - Welcome to P- Soup, hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your words and thoughts here with us. - Have fun with words and share your comments . - Have a nice Sunday! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Benjamin David Date: 3/17/2013 8:09:00 AM Your endearing words touch me insatiably, thank you, Anne-Lisa. I hope you found this poem particularly rewarding. Wishing you all the happiness you bestow and more..