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Below is the poem entitled Flowers which was written by poet Benjamin David. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Kneeling upon a smile to touch the vine
Scentful seeping in blissful sensation
Leering beauty and plucking temptation
Just one piece of nature's heaven divine

Arose to steal a kiss from sunlight's ray
Like morning's dew upon a suffused glow
Facing the zephyr where the blossoms blow
Where pollens aflutter towards the bay

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  1. Date: 7/27/2013 5:34:00 AM
    Poetically wonderful Ben. Congratulations on you fantastic win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 9:53:00 PM
    Hello Benjamin, the poem is hot and Awesome... sweet and pretty. congrats with your summer time Linda

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 12:49:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning spot Benjamin x x

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 7:29:00 PM
    Congratulations Benjamin, fantastic write using a very difficult form and you pulled it off big time!...'Kneeling upon a smile'...WOW

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 1:26:00 PM
    Congratulations David, a lovely gift of a poem. Thank you for the support my contest. Stop by and enjoy my blog: (A Lavender Day-- summer contest) winners. Have yourself an awesome day. LUV ~SKAT

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 11:04:00 AM
    The second para is so mesmerizing...congratulations on your well deserved win!!

  1. Date: 7/14/2013 9:31:00 PM
    Way to describe the flowers. Pollens aflutter, I like that part. Reminds me of the birds and insects carrying along the scent far across the land. Like the use of personification as well. Excellent word choice once again. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 3/28/2013 4:10:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Benjamin xx

    David Avatar Benjamin David
    Date: 5/2/2013 1:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much, Mandy, much appreciated.
  1. Date: 3/27/2013 5:39:00 PM
    Benjamin, The New Poets of 2013, Congratulations in this contest. Hope to read more of your poems. Take Care*SKAT

    David Avatar Benjamin David
    Date: 3/27/2013 5:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much, Skat, endearing words that sweeten my heart.
  1. Date: 3/25/2013 6:32:00 AM
    Benjamin, beautifully written. Rick

    David Avatar Benjamin David
    Date: 3/25/2013 7:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Rick, your words touch me.
  1. Date: 3/24/2013 8:29:00 PM
    Benjamin, CONGRATULATIONS with the first poem you posted on the soup :-) it was an honor in hosting this contest for the New Poets of 2013. Thank you for the support. Please enjoy your winning poem. By the way, I posted a blog in honor of the poets who made the list of this contest. The blogs name ----> ""I got the answer :-) What is a poet?"" please check out the blog when you have time. It's a nice gesture from me to you ~ xox ~ LINDA

    David Avatar Benjamin David
    Date: 3/25/2013 7:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I am gracefully appreciative, thank you, Linda.
  1. Date: 3/17/2013 8:05:00 AM
    - Benjamin, you have posted a lovely poem, you write very well. - Welcome to P- Soup, hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your words and thoughts here with us. - Have fun with words and share your comments . - Have a nice Sunday! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    David Avatar Benjamin David
    Date: 3/17/2013 8:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Your endearing words touch me insatiably, thank you, Anne-Lisa. I hope you found this poem particularly rewarding. Wishing you all the happiness you bestow and more..