Flag- Haiku

standard proudly flown red white and blue unity bickering sisters My Union Jack, United Kingdom For contest 'Flag Haiku' sponsored by Skat A July16th 2015

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/27/2015 8:44:00 PM

Viv, Congratulations on your awesome win. every poem has been an honor to read. Love LINDA

Viv Wigley
Date: 7/27/2015 9:19:00 PM

Thanks, Linda, everybody stepped up to the plate on this one, Viv x

Paul Callus

Date: 7/25/2015 3:51:00 PM

Congratulations on this cleverly worded haiku, Viv! Time for those bickering sisters to find an honourable solution! #7 // paul

Viv Wigley
Date: 7/26/2015 12:35:00 AM

Grazzi, Paul, that's my stint as a Political commentator out of the way. Regards, Viv

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/24/2015 10:49:00 PM

I LOVE the twist!! Congrats with this gem

Viv Wigley
Date: 7/26/2015 12:36:00 AM

Thank you kindly, Andrea, always love a Haiku. Viv x

Jan Allison

Date: 7/24/2015 5:48:00 PM

Very clever Mr Viv Many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Viv Wigley
Date: 7/26/2015 12:37:00 AM

Thanks, Jan, sometimes I can be more clever and shrewd than- well, one of those clever shrewd things, that is so clever and shrewd that it.... oh, just shut up, Viv. x