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Fitting-In

All the trusts I had left in you Are slowly fading fast Pretentiousness is a killer That could bury you without a fight Hoping desperately to fit in In your li’l world full of shame Wandering around in the street Of totally wrong crowds There is absolutely nothing To see In this kind of scene Only bunch of losers Struggling to fit-in Image is everything In the world of fools and fakers No wonder their lives are empty Surrounded with misery. Credibility is a virtue Something you will never grasp For your life is just a sham Tested by wasted time

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Skat A

Date: 7/14/2014 10:10:00 AM

Gisele,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/14/2014 12:57:00 AM

Hello Gisele, stopping by to read your poem once again. WOW... The ending, sure makes me think. A world, of fools and fakers. trying to fit in at any cost... Hope to see a new one from you.. xox..Linda

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 7/13/2014 6:13:00 PM

well, I went back to read more of you, but there's no more you to Read. SO. my advice to you this instant see, is get back to writing PLEASE~ :)

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 7/13/2014 6:09:00 PM

Important Lessons you meshed in to that credible flow. ThX Yo!~JSL

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/13/2014 12:22:00 PM

Hi Gisele, thank you for sharing this beautiful, inspirational write! Well done!

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/12/2014 2:46:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup, Gisele. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!

Gisele Marie

Date: 7/11/2014 2:20:00 PM

Thank you all for your warm welcome! I have never written a poem prior to this so I hope my poem made sense to the readers. I trust that with constant practice and reading I will get better over time. I welcome your positive feedback and guidance. Thank again!

James Hyler

Date: 7/11/2014 1:51:00 PM

Thank you for sharing :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/10/2014 11:17:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Gisele :) - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/10/2014 10:59:00 AM

Gisele, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@