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First Kiss - Visual 4

This night- Will always shine, Far grander than the sheen, Charmed from the street by your green eyes... My love. An American Beauty: Write Like Adelaide Contest 11 Jan 2015

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Skat A

Date: 2/1/2015 2:22:00 PM

DAVID, CONGRATULATIONS on your win *Love Sweet* SKAT

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/28/2015 7:53:00 AM

Congrats on your win, David! I love your romantic take on the picture...hugs, Rhonda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2015 4:22:00 PM

cute love poem. Congrats in my contest.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/25/2015 3:41:00 PM

Nicely done David, congrats!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 1/14/2015 5:33:00 PM

Just stunning David what a thrill to read!

Jan Allison

Date: 1/12/2015 11:42:00 AM

Such wonderful romantic imagery - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xxx

Paul Callus

Date: 1/12/2015 10:30:00 AM

I agree with Dave...this is very beautiful and romantic. I already see it as a winner. #7 // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 1/26/2015 11:18:00 AM

Congratulation on your fine win, David, although I am disappointed at not seeing it place higher! // paul