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First Impression - Impress Me Contest

Oh Giorgio how can i imress you What words can i say Shall I write about a blue sky On a summers day. Maybe a mighty boat That sailed away to heavens gates Taking with it our loved ones To a painfree home, to watch and wait Think i will write about the heartache Brought on by those in power Sending our lads to fight A battle no one wants to endure How about I write of love You seek and you will find Where you want to hold and touch Lustily seductive, mind twisting kind Hope i have impressed you With these few words of mine Even more so I think Cos i penned it all in rhyme Penned 27 July 2013

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/27/2013 5:56:00 PM

I delight in your sweet words, seren.. distintly flavored to enthrall!..:) huggs

Seren Roberts
Date: 7/27/2013 7:45:00 PM

Hi Nette, glad you liked it........Seren

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/27/2013 6:10:00 AM

If you don't place high I would be greatly disappointed Seren! I really enjoyed reading this amazing and superior poem this morning! What a lovely piece, such a glorious poem, Great Work!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 7/27/2013 7:47:00 PM

Hello Russell, we shall ser, i enjoyed writing it , thats all that matters ...Seren

Monterey Sirak

Date: 7/27/2013 5:48:00 AM

This one should do well in the contest. Beautifully written, you connect different ideas and make them flow as one.

Seren Roberts
Date: 7/27/2013 7:44:00 PM

Oops should read Helllo

Seren Roberts
Date: 7/27/2013 7:43:00 PM

Helli and thanks Monterey.....Seren