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His First Flight

Across the scarlet sunset , I see a little sea-bird. Pretending to be strong , Actually its making a feeble cry. Flapping wings again and again, Its afraid and not giving a try. The great sky and the vast sea , Are making its throat dry. Everybody came to boost it up , Finally mother came with a fishful cup. In the name of God , The little one jumped. With eyes closed and heart thumped. And wow! its magic , Its faith, its love. That made it fly , Above the sea and across the sky. Inspired BY 'HIS FIRST FLIGHT' (Liam O' Flaherty)

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Date: 3/11/2014 9:38:00 PM
hi, there,I came back to this one. But I think I have read all your poems so I need some new ones from you!! I'll be waiting for one!
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Date: 1/24/2014 9:13:00 PM
what a sweet little poem. I could just picture them helping this poor sea bird flopping about. Nice one to see tonight.
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Date: 1/17/2014 3:20:00 AM
Enjoyed stopping by reading this lovely poem of yours .... A very cute , sweet , and encouraging poem !! Love and smiles, Saanvi : - )
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Date: 1/4/2014 10:45:00 AM
The story is good and you write it well.Have a sweet dreams...
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Archana Garg
Date: 1/5/2014 12:26:00 AM
thanks... Actually i read this story and tried to change it into a poem.

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