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Below is the poem entitled FIRST FLIGHT which was written by poet Archana Garg. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Across the scarlet sunset  , 
I see a little sea-bird.
Pretending to be strong ,
Actually its making a feeble cry.
Flapping wings again and again,
Its afraid and not giving a try.
The great sky and the vast sea , 
Is making its throat dry.
Everybody came to boost it up ,
Finally mother came with a  fishful cup.
In the name of God ,
The little one jumped.
With eyes closed and heart thumped.
And  wow , its magic , 
Its faith and love.
That made it fly ,
Above the sea and across the sky.

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  1. Date: 3/11/2014 9:38:00 PM
    hi, there,I came back to this one. But I think I have read all your poems so I need some new ones from you!! I'll be waiting for one!

  1. Date: 1/24/2014 9:13:00 PM
    what a sweet little poem. I could just picture them helping this poor sea bird flopping about. Nice one to see tonight.

  1. Date: 1/17/2014 3:20:00 AM
    Enjoyed stopping by reading this lovely poem of yours .... A very cute , sweet , and encouraging poem !! Love and smiles, Saanvi : - )

  1. Date: 1/4/2014 10:45:00 AM
    The story is good and you write it well.Have a sweet dreams...

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    Date: 1/5/2014 12:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks... Actually i read this story and tried to change it into a poem.