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Fire Opal Skies - Visual 2

Birds bespeckle tangerine skies As sun meets sea in waves of gold Upon the wind the birds now rise Birds bespeckle tangerine skies As summer frames the sun's demise On gentle breeze beauty unfolds Birds bespeckle tangerine skies As sun meets sea in waves of gold

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Date: 6/13/2015 8:57:00 PM
Your words paint a lovely picture, Joseph! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/13/2015 8:05:00 PM
Back for congrats Joseph...a beauty to be sure!
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Date: 6/13/2015 7:51:00 PM
Lovely verbal image here, Joseph, with your interpretation of that visual! Congrats on your nice win. And thank you so much for your nice comment and congrats on my poem, 'The Country Road'. Sandra
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Date: 6/13/2015 6:28:00 PM
JOSPEH, Congratulations on your LOVELY SUMMER TRIOLET ----- SKAT :-)
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Date: 6/13/2015 5:39:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Jospeh:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/13/2015 12:58:00 AM
Irregular meter kept it from getting higher, Joseph. This is just about as pretty as a triolet can get. Congrats in my contest.
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Date: 5/29/2015 6:11:00 AM
Your captivating imagery serves you well, Joseph! Love the tangerine skies! gl in the contest. // paul
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Date: 5/27/2015 8:28:00 PM
This is wonderful Joseph...sure to shine in Andrea's eyes
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Date: 5/24/2015 4:12:00 PM
That's a stunning triolet. Forever **SKAT**
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Date: 5/24/2015 3:04:00 PM
the imagery is simply delightful Joseph - good luck in the contest - I love the idea of tangerine skies - simply sublime:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx
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