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Hope Awaits

Here, I lie motionless like the tint of ocean's breath. A roulette of fading stars glistens in tidal whisper of night, and the incredibly sentient call of migrant birds wing on ribs of leaves where tenderness gushes with tenderness. clouds are scattering in the midst of a blank pause... lies a full mantle How unstoppable are the eyes of winds spilling a basin of potpourri into my territory,requesting the nymph in my body for a sway of pleasure. Will I spare this splendor so pagan and pure that my riled energy can smother the natural movement of this hour? I welcome the flame, together with ice; and allow inspiration's flow to just be. clouds expand, rain drips new blossoms of hope unfurl... and the air settles Nayda Ivette Negron's Contest: Hope

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Date: 4/30/2014 7:59:00 AM
Beautiful poem ! U really know how to play wid words ! Congrats on win !
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Date: 4/30/2014 2:11:00 AM
Great write on Rock My world contest. Congrats on the win. nette
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Date: 4/29/2014 8:08:00 PM
Nette xool rocking poem... Congrats in D G.'s contest.... Linda
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Date: 4/28/2014 7:44:00 AM
Dearest nett..you'll rock her world...:-) This is like fine porcelain china in words..behind glass and dared not touched.....
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Date: 4/27/2014 5:40:00 AM
Wow! Perfection! "Motionless like the tint of ocean's breath" oh the anticipation, the waiting for it to happen, and you do not disappoint.
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Date: 4/24/2014 8:59:00 AM
Im a fan of haibuns. Debbie G. got me hooked...haha. Yours is dreamy and fragrant.....oh, so sweet. Loved it, Nette.
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Date: 4/24/2014 4:04:00 AM
stunning Nette the prose is uplifting and the Haiku's beguile and enchant superb pen hugs
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Date: 4/23/2014 2:25:00 PM
ahhh......the prose captures me.....but then the haiku enchancing the prose is perfect! "in the midst of a blank pause".....what a lovely line that is !! :)
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Date: 4/23/2014 10:04:00 AM
I love your forays into sensual areas difficult to describe, Love, daver
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Date: 4/23/2014 9:31:00 AM
Your gift always draw me back to PS and you never fail to amaze dear Nette. You are so inspired and talented. Alofas, Tiaua.
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Date: 4/23/2014 3:48:00 AM
*sigh* Your writing makes me swoon. Nette talaga when we meet nga can you please do me a favor and sign my planner? HAHAHAHAHA
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Date: 4/22/2014 9:29:00 PM
Beautifuly written haibun, nette. the mantle is especially effective. I am amazed at how you can fit such imagery in three short lines. I have been reading too much minimalist haiku which lacks color sometimes almost completely. Thank you too for commenting on my Reshaping the Plea.
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Date: 4/22/2014 4:37:00 PM
I like your vision of accepting opposites and then giving rise to the call of inspiration in the end. Brilliant poem, Nette!
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