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Find Me In Six - Lost and Found

Lost and Found Find me in the shadow of life’s archway waiting…’neath the grey of dingy art work pressed into the dark of passing's moment, wilted roses held limply in old hands clinging to the sounds of lovers voices whispering to the darkness – “Please….find me.”. 1/17/2017 submitted to – FIND ME IN SIX – Poetry contest

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Arlene Smith

Date: 1/23/2017 8:12:00 AM

This is one of my favorites! Big congrats!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/22/2017 12:57:00 PM

I love the sad tone of this one, John. A pleasure to read it!! Congrats on the winners' list.

Winged Warrior

Date: 1/22/2017 8:51:00 AM

Congrats!!! my friend...god bless...^WW^

Eve Roper

Date: 1/21/2017 9:20:00 PM

John, congratulations on your win Hugs

Paul Callus

Date: 1/21/2017 4:06:00 PM

Lying in wait for love...alas, those wilted roses show that the wait has been too long! But for those who patiently wait there is hope eternal. Congrats on your fine win, John. Regards // paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/21/2017 2:27:00 PM

beautiful portrait of longing so well stroked, john!... big congrats on your fine slot and thanks for being here..huggs

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 1/21/2017 10:19:00 AM

Wow, John this is really, really good! Sorry this has to be another fav.

Chris Green

Date: 1/17/2017 5:42:00 PM

This is a great entry to the contest John. This poem is perfect for the theme.