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Find Me In Six - Find Me

Find me in the sea full of empty shells. They are bones over Noah’s burnt vessel, ashes of gopher, Calvary’s wood the timeless ark and rungs on Jacob’s ladder. Moor your might to my truth and blink your eye. Before you’re adrift in Luke’s gulf, find me. ------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: 01.18.17 Contest: Find Me In Six Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

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Date: 5/31/2017 12:08:00 AM
I am more partial to the shape version. Still your words resonate.
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Date: 4/2/2017 8:48:00 PM
stopping by to say hi as I hurry to go make dinner for Joe. Dang he is coming home early and I have 25 comments yet to go. ay!!! Was there some poem of yours that you told me about that I had not seen? Let me know.
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Date: 2/8/2017 1:46:00 PM
Such a creative take on the theme congrats on your win Rob:-) hugs Jan xx
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Rob Carmack
Date: 2/20/2017 2:08:00 AM
xxx Jan xxx, thank you.
Date: 1/31/2017 9:04:00 AM
WOW, Rob this is so good. An amazing write. Will add to my favourites. Hope this finds you well and happy. Lots Of Love, armand.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 2/4/2017 12:13:00 AM
Thank you Armand, glad to see you back.
Date: 1/30/2017 9:10:00 AM
This is cool Rob!
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Rob Carmack
Date: 2/4/2017 12:13:00 AM
Thanks Richard.
Date: 1/22/2017 12:54:00 PM
wow, Rob, very biblical!! Deep and I think I well know who "me" is!! Congrats on a well deserved win.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 1/25/2017 10:15:00 PM
Thank you Andrea.
Date: 1/22/2017 10:43:00 AM
Beautifully woven with a spiritual message Rob...Congrats on a great win...
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Rob Carmack
Date: 1/25/2017 10:14:00 PM
Thanks Joseph.
Date: 1/21/2017 9:38:00 PM
So many wonderful Biblical references. Very creative thoughts. Congratulations.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 1/21/2017 11:47:00 PM
Thank you Janice.
Date: 1/21/2017 3:32:00 PM
Full marks for your creativity, Rob. I love it! Congratulations on a fine win. Regards // paul
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Rob Carmack
Date: 1/21/2017 11:47:00 PM
Thank you Paul.
Date: 1/21/2017 2:14:00 PM
what a unique take on the theme, rob... enjoyed the biblical references!... best congrats on your award and thanks for participating..huggs
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Rob Carmack
Date: 1/21/2017 11:47:00 PM
Thank you for my placement. Hugs squared.

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