Get Your Premium Membership

After Forever

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Sandra Haight.


 

With Big Bang flash, our Universe was spun, exploding with a force that quickly spread. Now, science does predict oblivion when all the energy of stars is dead. Just half of all these energies remain of what there was two billion years ago. Two-hundred thousand galaxies now wane with weakness of that surge which feeds their flow. Survival of all living forms is moot, for these evolved from Big Bang cosmic brew. And in the end, the only absolute... oblivion, the final stage...adieu. Where stars and planets whirl in bright array, the darkest, black oblivion will splay. December 8, 2015 ~2nd Place~ Contest: After Forever Sponsor: John Lawless Judged: 12/22/2017 ~2nd Place~ Contest: Oblivion Sponsor: Rob Carmack Judged: 12/19/2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 12/25/2017 9:15:00 PM
I love your take on the contest prompt, Sandra. It will be a very long time until the final oblivion :) Congrats on your win.
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 12/29/2017 2:30:00 PM
Thank you so much, Agnes. I appreciate your visits and lovely comments! Happy New Year! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/24/2017 6:45:00 AM
A sad write! Congrats on your win Sandra!
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 12/29/2017 2:30:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim. I appreciate your visits and lovely comments! Happy New Year! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/23/2017 1:35:00 PM
Congrats Sandra, TY for the glimpse to tne end of time.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/22/2017 10:06:00 PM
Beautiful journey out in the galaxies. Well done and congrats on your win, Sandra.
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 12/29/2017 2:29:00 PM
Thank you so much, Line. I appreciate your visits and lovely comments! Happy New Year! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/22/2017 9:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this fantastic piece! Blessings xomo
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 12/29/2017 2:28:00 PM
Thank you so much, Maureen. I appreciate your visits and lovely comments! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/22/2017 5:39:00 PM
An edgy scientific Sonnet...quite a unique take on the theme, Sandra. Well done and thanks for participating in the contest
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 12/29/2017 2:27:00 PM
Thank you for the great contest theme, John, and for my nice placement. Happy New Year to you! Sandra
Date: 12/24/2015 10:55:00 PM
Sorry that I previously missed replying to this contest being finished. Congrats on your well deserved win my friend.
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 12/26/2015 9:11:00 AM
Robert, thank you so much for all your positive and supportive comments on my poems. This is such a busy time of year, and still you find the time to be so supportive. Much appreciated for sure. Hope you had a wonderful and blessed Christmas Day. Sandra "
Date: 12/20/2015 12:23:00 AM
Sandra, Congrats on your win In Rob Carmack's Oblivion contest. Love ~LINDA~
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 12/20/2015 9:41:00 PM
Hi Linda, thank you so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/19/2015 9:31:00 PM
Congratulations on 2nd place win. I found this to be a fascinating poem and very creative, with truth mixed in. Great job!
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 12/20/2015 9:41:00 PM
Hi Susan, thank you so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/19/2015 2:24:00 PM
SANDRA, Congrats on your Oblivion WIN **SKAT**
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 12/20/2015 9:41:00 PM
Thank you, Skat. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/19/2015 11:58:00 AM
Congrats Sandra on your well deserved win..Be blessed! -lloo *smiles*
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 12/20/2015 9:41:00 PM
Hi Laura, thank you so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/19/2015 11:05:00 AM
Oh, did I enjoy this write, Sandra. Congratulations on your win ... CayCay
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 12/20/2015 9:40:00 PM
Thank you so much, CayCay. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/10/2015 9:55:00 AM
This is so so amazing, dear Sandra!! Hope it wins!! All the best in the contest!! :D :D
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 12/10/2015 7:36:00 PM
Hi Sneha, I appreciate your stopping by with your supportive comment and best wishes. Thank you so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/8/2015 1:15:00 PM
This is an outstanding entry Sandra! I felt transported! #7
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 12/10/2015 7:35:00 PM
Hi Connie, thank you for stopping by with your nice comment and supportive 7. I appreciate your visits so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/8/2015 9:59:00 AM
Very nice Sandra should do well in contest.
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 12/10/2015 7:31:00 PM
Thank you, John. Hope it's not too dark. But it's based on truth...not in our time, however. Sandra

Book: Shattered Sighs