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Feelings and Tears

Tears try hard to hide. And feelings are much the same This I’ve come to know. Feelings, sometimes, walk with tears. So, each other, they betray. Written By John Posey 04/20/13

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/6/2013 2:57:00 PM
I know this to be true, all to well. You've said so much here, with very few words...I wish that I could do that!...Fantastic poetry, Jake!...Please, read my new poem titled, "Tears In Heaven"...Thank you for the nice comments on my poem, "Broken Wings". I am sorry if I made you feel that way. But, the reality of life can make one sick, sometimes! :)
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Date: 5/25/2013 12:43:00 PM
BEAUTIFUL! Depth in a few words....
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Date: 5/25/2013 3:39:00 PM
Thanks, Lori. Your comments are appreciated
Date: 5/3/2013 8:38:00 PM
Very true John, sometimes our feelings deceive us from whats actually real, great stuff , blessings Carl
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Date: 5/3/2013 6:47:00 AM
John, so true and beautiful - well done. - Wishing you a restful weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/28/2013 6:16:00 PM
This is so true, John. You've worded this so very well. Thank you ever so much for your visits to my work. I do appreciate hearing from you. God bless. :)
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Date: 4/25/2013 6:10:00 PM
Cool idea, "each other they betray" I liked that.
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Date: 4/25/2013 2:17:00 PM
Exquisite!
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Date: 4/23/2013 2:09:00 PM
Definately a success the first time. Loved it...
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Date: 4/21/2013 2:12:00 PM
So true and beautiful!
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Date: 4/21/2013 11:14:00 AM
Tankas are hard to do (for me anyway... you've done a very nice 'job'... Terry
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John Posey
Date: 4/21/2013 11:20:00 AM
Thanks, Terry. These syllable counting is going to be the death of my knuckles..... Love ya..... Jake
Date: 4/20/2013 9:57:00 PM
Very emotional...I get this John....
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John Posey
Date: 4/21/2013 9:31:00 AM
Thank you Donna. This was my first attempt at Tanka..... Jake
Date: 4/20/2013 9:57:00 PM
Very true! Lovely tanka. Thanks for sharing.
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