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Featured Poet**mr. Brooks

An Acrostic poem from a featured artist.. 1/20/2010 **Patience** Partly to blame I Accept my penance. To quick to love,knowing the end was Imminent. Yet I strive to Endure......to overcome Never thinking that loves Choices,would lead me to an Extreme conundrum!!! ChocolateWoW Sam Brooks

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Date: 1/27/2010 8:36:00 AM

This is a profound poem with much for the reader to reflect on. Thank you for sharing it with us and for your kind comment. Karen

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 1/22/2010 4:49:00 AM

I like this one by Mr. Brooks, keep on writing, dude!

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/21/2010 11:56:00 PM

AMAZING Mr. Brooks...this one speaks volumes...Raul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/21/2010 12:38:00 PM

Good one here! I got a bit confused with loves. Just put love's (with apostrophe) there! An enjoyable read! andrea

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 1/20/2010 7:15:00 PM

Great Acrostic, Jared. Thanks for your comments. Love, Iolanda

Marty Owens

Date: 1/20/2010 2:33:00 PM

Acrostics are one of my favorites and this is very good...Both these guys need to join PS...Marty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/20/2010 1:14:00 PM

Unique.. I like Acrostics.. challenging ..always up for a good challenge.. OK Mr. J. u and Mr. Brooks are on.. threesome sounds intriguing ..writing that is... but u know me by now don't u?? take all the time u need for the collab.. let me knw when u and Mr. B. are ready... to culminate the poem ... this might be a first for the Soup.. do u think it can handle us?? luv.. "Sweetheart"

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/20/2010 1:03:00 PM

More, more! Bring Mr. Brooks into the family, Jared! He says so much in few words. Awesome! Love, Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/20/2010 11:28:00 AM

What is the chocolate wow? does that mean it was written by someone else?

John Freeman

Date: 1/20/2010 9:26:00 AM

You have a cool flow Jared. What I have grown to expect from you, my friend. Sincerely, Moses