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Father-in-law cares

Love drips from his voice
As he rang me out of bed 
''Hope you guys are fine''   

These words stream my soul
To seconds of sweet silence
I replied, so fine.    

 Another dawn he'll call
Spilling the same syllables
In the same verse form.     

 For Dr.Ram Mehta's contest: 'In-Laws'  
Joseph Osita

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  1. Date: 6/8/2011 8:03:00 PM
    Joseph, Great job on this honored presentation. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 6/8/2011 10:13:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest Joseph. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/7/2011 8:29:00 AM
    This is very sweet :). I guess in-laws can get credit too, right :)

  1. Date: 6/6/2011 8:49:00 PM
    I remember yours.It's so sweet. one of the best! congrats.

  1. Date: 6/6/2011 8:34:00 PM
    hmmm, too much early morning love? or not enough? LOL congrad's on your win! [She is Daddies little girl ;)] Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/6/2011 3:43:00 PM
    congrats Joseph on your spectacular win in Dr. Ram's contest with another super write luv.. enjoy again and again..thankxx for all your sweet comments on my wins as well luv..

  1. Date: 6/6/2011 3:17:00 PM
    Joseph- Therapeutic pause works well before u respond, huh? ha ha. NIce write for Dr. Ram's contest. Congrats on your high mark! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 6/6/2011 3:11:00 PM
    Congratulations on the fourth place win in my contest, Joseph

  1. Date: 5/25/2011 7:36:00 PM
    You are lucky to have such a caring father in law!

  1. Date: 5/25/2011 10:56:00 AM
    I'm glad you have a good relationship with your father-in-law, Joseph. Great entry for Dr. Ram's contest! Wishing you success, my friend. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/24/2011 12:44:00 PM
    Please give once over to the spelling in the title, Joseph

  1. Date: 5/24/2011 12:33:00 PM
    Thanks for the entry, Joseph