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A father is suppose to be an anchor and a guide. My father was that and more to me. He shared his love for nature and all God's creatures. I recall from the time I could walk, taking his hand and we would go on an adventure, he whispered that in my ear. He had special places to show me and he would talk and talk. He loved to do projects and I would sit beside him at his bench. I loved to watch him, I admired his hands. He kept a messy workshop, but it had charm. My father had a good sense of humour. Always playing jokes on mother, that made me laugh, odd, I seldom laugh anymore. A father is always proud, and mine was. Everything I did was a big deal to him. And my father knew that I had a sadness in my heart and he tried his best to mend my broken heart. The day he died I was shattered, totally, and I held that hand I loved for the longest time. father cannot see my sad tears that are falling on his mossy tomb _______________________________ May 17, 2016 Poetry/Haibun/My Father Copyright Protected, ID 16-791-542-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to Second Chance 2, sponsor, Eve Roper Third Place

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Date: 6/18/2016 2:44:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 6/9/2016 8:08:00 AM
This was quite touching, it is clear that you were the apple of his eye, and he'll always be in your heart. Wonderful write, congratulations.
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Date: 6/8/2016 5:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Broken Wing! Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/19/2016 5:22:00 PM
Sometimes, no one really gets us like our father did, or ever will. I like to think of mine expressing himself through me, and my poems, although he is dead twenty years now. That kind of bond is never broken.
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Date: 5/18/2016 4:43:00 PM
Wonderful Constance, this remembrance of your father expressed in one of my favorite forms, the haibun!
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Date: 5/18/2016 9:43:00 AM
This hit me so, so hard. :( Wonderfully touching & uplifting.
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Date: 5/18/2016 8:11:00 AM
Beautiful. Very touching write. Thanks for sharing it
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Date: 5/18/2016 5:28:00 AM
A true blessing when one is fortunate enough to have a good father. Good luck with the contest Constance.
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Date: 5/17/2016 9:26:00 PM
What a special relationship you had with your father Constance...I was smiling picturing my girls with me...It is so sad that the people we love the most have to leave us.
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Date: 5/17/2016 9:15:00 PM
Beautiful... It must have been hard to let go of his hand. He is with you always!
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Constance La France
Date: 5/17/2016 9:20:00 PM
Lucas, you are right, (they) had to pull me away... thanks for the beautiful ...

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