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Far, Far Away

The days draw ever closer with my imminent need to leave With promises to keep and goals to achieve My ultimate desire is to disappear But mighty are the binds that keep me here And so I sat down to write a song About this place where I could belong My nirvana, my world and art Where every little craze tickles my heart I wish upon a star that is too far Hoping for a yearn that makes me churn For this I will strive night and day To find this place, so I pray CONTEST: Your favorite poem ~By Carol Eastman~ *awarded 1st place*

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/7/2016 6:10:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go ..Thanks for the visit to my page..I enjoyed reading this winner..Sara
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Wilfred Aniagyei
Date: 5/9/2016 11:32:00 AM
Thank you, Sara....... Much love!
Date: 3/29/2015 9:44:00 PM
WILFRED, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Love LINDA
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Date: 3/19/2015 12:25:00 PM
WILFRED, Congratulations on your awesome win..... Luv ~LINDA~
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Wilfred Aniagyei
Date: 3/23/2015 8:03:00 AM
Thank you for hosting a great contest....
Date: 3/13/2015 3:34:00 PM
Congrats bro! It feels great to be audience to your words. #WayYoGo
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Date: 6/24/2014 10:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win and welcome to Poetry Soup. Your poem is beautiful. I hope you find some good friends here. may many blessings come your way... Lucilla
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Date: 9/20/2013 7:56:00 AM
congratulations, WIlfred...............SKAT
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Date: 9/19/2013 10:14:00 AM
Wilfred, , congratulations:) In Seren's "what makes you tick" contest... always~ Linda
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Date: 9/18/2013 10:17:00 PM
Nice thoughts. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/16/2013 6:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement.
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Date: 9/16/2013 2:47:00 PM
Wilfred, congrats on a wonderful win! Love, Kim
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Date: 9/15/2013 2:32:00 PM
Congratulations and thank you for entering my contest .... Seren
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Date: 9/14/2013 7:30:00 PM
Wilfred,, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem FEATURED on the soups Home Page:-). Good-Night **Linda**
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Date: 9/12/2013 4:37:00 AM
Congrats on your poem being featured this weak
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Date: 9/11/2013 3:27:00 PM
Very lovely Wilfried, it should do well I think, congratulations on having this poem featured.
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Date: 9/11/2013 3:29:00 AM
Good afternoon Wilfred! I read this incredible work by you. You are a marvellous poet...this is my first visit...and hope i get to read more from you...cheers !
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Wilfred Aniagyei
Date: 9/11/2013 1:23:00 PM
Thanks Red!!!!!! Feels great to be appreciated by fellow magnificent writers!!! Hope to hear a lot from you too!
Date: 9/11/2013 2:21:00 AM
nyc one,,, i love it.... i love how the meanig is hidden but clear,,,
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Date: 8/30/2013 4:37:00 PM
Hi Wilfred, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat *
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Wilfred Aniagyei
Date: 9/4/2013 4:18:00 PM
Wow! Thanks! that would be great...............looking forward to it..............!
Date: 8/30/2013 1:42:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Wilfred ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/29/2013 5:24:00 PM
Hi Wilfred, lovely and nice , thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Wilfred Aniagyei
Date: 9/4/2013 4:21:00 PM
Thanks Linda........just getting the feel of this place.......Already loving it! I'm looking forward to your contest

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