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The girls were slow the act was nice but they were slow the drinks were melting the ice 
before the patrons reordered some. The place was dead the sex was pantomimed. The 
director decided to try some old Burlesque routines they had nothing left to lose. Three girls 
naked from the top kissing each other not able to stop while wiggling there fantails up an 
down an up and down they hoped it would bring down the house an it almost succeeded but 
for the small drunk in the middle row JOE he smiled at the half naked ladies but he wanted to 
get in on the act. He waddled to the stage and chased the girls around trying to actually get a 
kiss at his age it was all he could hope for. They did not laugh no snicker no crack a half 
facebook smile they dickered quickly for rights to which one would kick him off that stage 
and the red headed long winded girl won. He tried to rally his attack and came back to the 
edge of the orchestrated pitt she turned her back and hit him with her fantail shrimpe fell 
headlong into the place where they were playing musick there. Oh WELL now that IS a deep 
subject. Playing now at every bar and grill in town.

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  1. Date: 6/5/2009 11:20:00 AM
    A pretty seductive tale ... must be quite an arousing sight ... I think the plot is good away from the narrative write ... it has urgency for applause. Well done!