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Falling Apart -- Trevor Depugh

"Dear God, Mom's left, I don't even care anymore. She punched me in the face and then, Said she hoped I'd burn in hell. Dear God, Dad's lost his mind, The succubus is no more, Now he only wants mom, But she'd rather be a whore. Dear God, something's going on with Trevor, My brother is fading in and out, He thought our family would be his savior, But now I guess the cat is out. Dear God, why do these things happen? Are you listening anymore? Day is dark, and night is black, My faith is in a war. Dear God, the little ones cry, They don't know how to be strong, My older sisters moved out, Why does everything feel so wrong... The youngest is crying, I'll have to go see what is wrong."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/8/2012 12:37:00 PM
I understand the hurt of no reply. Very intense poem tied together. If you need to talk im here :)
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Date: 5/8/2012 12:08:00 PM
A pleasure to read your poetry today Jessica. I will try to come back later this week to read more. I have a spring cold and not up to reading for too long. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/8/2012 7:42:00 AM
Jessica this is like a tennis match quickly switching back and forth..David
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