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Fall To Winter, Rise To Spring

Fall to Winter, Rise to Spring Fallen, down and out Frozen, not dead nor decayed Rising, faith with wings! Kim Patrice Nunez November 15,2014

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 8/5/2015 11:39:00 PM

This is a glorious one, Kim. I really admire a vivid and hopeful Haiku, and this is just so lovely. Hope you are doing well! Always, Laura

Norman Crocker

Date: 7/25/2015 1:31:00 PM

Very well done.

Jan Terry

Date: 7/16/2015 4:02:00 PM

This haiku is interesting. Can have so many meanings depending on the reader. The title is an observation on life in itself. Think this is one of the best I've read. Would like to see more. You excell at Haiku. Best. ;) Janece

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/7/2015 4:21:00 AM

Creative work that you have penned in this one..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Casarah Nance

Date: 5/29/2015 7:16:00 AM

Beautiful description! :)

Cynthia Jones

Date: 4/18/2015 8:52:00 AM

Kim, I really liked this Haiku. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia

Gerald Dillenbeck

Date: 4/9/2015 10:10:00 PM

Yes, much shorter and to the same point. Rising faith with wings matures full summer's regenerative harvest. Lovely.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/5/2015 12:30:00 AM

ahhh, season to season. So nice!! Was hard for me to find a poem of yours I had not seen yet!!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 2/24/2015 10:04:00 PM

This is absolutely beautiful and well, you are a genius!!! So much in those 3 lines!!

Robert Nehls

Date: 2/16/2015 4:16:00 PM

Hi Kim. These three lines can cover a multitude of subjects, time, and space. You have written universal wisdom into your words and arranged them in a way that stirs the senses. Very well done my friend. Blessings upon you.... Robert.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 2/8/2015 3:17:00 PM

truly very beautifully painted haiku kim

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/29/2015 8:15:00 AM

For me Haiku is the most difficult of forms. You seem to have it down.

Joanmarie Peranteau

Date: 12/6/2014 10:29:00 AM

Wonderful! The imagery is so clear, I thought of myself in this write. It speaks volumes to me though written in so few words. Artistically done.

Gary Bateman

Date: 12/1/2014 9:16:00 PM

Kim, A wonderful Haiku write here and a big "7" from me too!! Best Always, Gary

Darlene Gifford

Date: 11/15/2014 7:42:00 AM

A haiku expressing hope. I like it! And we all need those wings! A 7

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 11/15/2014 6:46:00 AM

beautiful.. :)

Marvin G. Celestial

Date: 11/15/2014 2:29:00 AM

Best piece as well Kim!

Kp Nunez

Date: 11/14/2014 7:04:00 PM

Thank you David. As before, you didn't fail to expand...on what comes from my wand. Deeply appreciates your thoughts...Kim:)

David Meade

Date: 11/14/2014 6:54:00 PM

A seed falls to the ground, dead but not dead, resting for the spring. The cycle of life -- how many times do we cycle through this . . . many!! Loved the haiku