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Fall the Pain

 
the chest . . .
aged, beautifully engraved and carved
it resides in a corridor of my mind, locked
my life story
the journey, each chapter
echoes of tears, melancholy

memories of regrets and grieve
and within this old chest
I place them all
the remorse, the despair, gloom and weeping emotions
I open the lid and let them go, fall
the pain . . .

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February 26, 2013


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Kash Poet Date: 5/6/2013 7:29:00 AM hi Constance,rereading this beautiful poem....enjoyed again. Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 3/15/2013 8:34:00 AM What a creative new form, and of course your words always stir the heart with deep emotion. As always, beautifully written. :) Login to Reply

Mathias Yakubu Date: 3/15/2013 8:34:00 AM Ripple effect... Always increasing Constance Login to Reply

Todd Borstad Date: 3/14/2013 7:48:00 PM I like this a lot. You truly have the mind and soul of a poet! Login to Reply

Todd Borstad Date: 3/14/2013 7:46:00 PM I like this a lot. The first poem I have read on this site with some depth. You truly have the mind and soul of a poet! Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 3/6/2013 10:17:00 AM enjoying these awesome words again, my friend. hope you and the kitties are well and warm. Mum just loves the canary! Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 3/4/2013 3:08:00 PM this is wonderful Constance, truly beautiful, and yes i can so much relate to this... Login to Reply

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 3/4/2013 3:00:00 AM This is very good. sometimes we have to let the pain go. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 3/2/2013 9:11:00 AM to FAVS! Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 3/2/2013 9:10:00 AM This is really SUBLIME!!I come here for this calmness.Thanks for reading my poem. Login to Reply

Phyllis Babcock Date: 3/1/2013 10:11:00 AM Wow this sure hits how we hold things inside and grieve within our chests. Well said with this write. love phyl Login to Reply

Mohammad Yamin Date: 3/1/2013 10:10:00 AM Wow! An incredible write. I am impressed. Thanks for your kind appreciation of my Tanka Garden's Glamour, CDH. I feel flattered. Love -Mohammad Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 3/1/2013 7:30:00 AM Lovely, Constance. Very deep and full of meaning..AND you have created a new form? WOW! Hats off to you. :) Thanks for your comments on my poem. I appreciate it! :) Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 2/28/2013 3:13:00 PM just love this clever write, Constance. Hope you and the kitties are keeping warm x Login to Reply

Tim Ryerson Date: 2/28/2013 1:46:00 PM Stunning, elegant and absolutely beautiful...just like you are - Tim Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 2/28/2013 7:38:00 AM This is sad yet beautiful Constance, you know I think we all have a chest of some description be it metaphorical or real yes we should let the pain fall luv xx Login to Reply

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 2/27/2013 8:29:00 PM This is sad. we all have things that we store away.That no one else must know, it's good to let them go. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 2/27/2013 2:01:00 PM Interesting Constance, hard to be cheery on a dreary day! Light & Love Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 2/26/2013 6:37:00 PM great write Constance....from time to time we must open the lid and let pain go...thanks for stopping by Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/26/2013 5:19:00 PM you know, this poem itself is so sublime, it really fits the form named sublime. I'm happy to see this one today. one of the prettiest of my day. Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 2/26/2013 11:11:00 AM Constance my continuous thought is I love your writing ...David Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 2/26/2013 9:51:00 AM Interesting work..If we could only put things that are unpleasant into a chest and let it go..Not so easily done..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara Login to Reply

Robert Pettit Date: 2/26/2013 9:22:00 AM Nice write about a piece of antique furniture. Login to Reply

Betty Bolden Date: 2/26/2013 8:00:00 AM Good write..I just lost my momma in jan of this year..thank you for being out here. Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 2/26/2013 6:18:00 AM This is an interesting form, I enjoy new forms to try, so this one I'll have to try, the Sublime form, hmmmm! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this morning, what an outstanding piece! You can surely write some amazing pieces, and this one is definitely one of those amazing poems my friend! Great Work!! Login to Reply