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fall the pain

 
~*~

the chest . . .
aged, beautifully engraved and carved
it resides in a corridor of my mind, locked
my life story
the journey, each chapter
echoes of tears, melancholy

memories of regrets and grieve
and within this old chest
I place them all
the remorse, the despair, gloom and weeping emotions
I open the lid and let them go, fall
the pain . . .

~*~




February 26, 2013




Sublime Form (Created by Constance)
2 Stanzas, 6 lines each
2/10/12/4/6/8  8/6/4/12/10/2, Syllable Count

One continuous thought

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kash poet Date: 5/6/2013 7:29:00 AM hi Constance,rereading this beautiful poem....enjoyed again.

Giorgio A. V. Date: 4/6/2013 8:11:00 PM It is beautiful, irradiating free verse. Bravo!

Carrie Richards Date: 3/15/2013 8:34:00 AM What a creative new form, and of course your words always stir the heart with deep emotion. As always, beautifully written. :)

Mathias Yakubu Date: 3/15/2013 8:34:00 AM Ripple effect... Always increasing Constance

todd borstad Date: 3/14/2013 7:48:00 PM I like this a lot. You truly have the mind and soul of a poet!

todd borstad Date: 3/14/2013 7:46:00 PM I like this a lot. The first poem I have read on this site with some depth. You truly have the mind and soul of a poet!

jack horne Date: 3/6/2013 10:17:00 AM enjoying these awesome words again, my friend. hope you and the kitties are well and warm. Mum just loves the canary!

harry horsman Date: 3/4/2013 3:08:00 PM this is wonderful Constance, truly beautiful, and yes i can so much relate to this...

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 3/4/2013 3:00:00 AM This is very good. sometimes we have to let the pain go. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Catie Lindsey Date: 3/2/2013 10:30:00 AM "fall, the pain." what gripping emotions in this one, Constance. I can easily relate to all of it. Now...if I can just figure out how to let go of the physical pain and discomfort too. Loved it! I do hope you will write for my free verse, Constance, I really love your work. love and hugs, catie :)

kash poet Date: 3/2/2013 9:11:00 AM to FAVS!

kash poet Date: 3/2/2013 9:10:00 AM This is really SUBLIME!!I come here for this calmness.Thanks for reading my poem.

Phyllis Babcock Date: 3/1/2013 10:11:00 AM Wow this sure hits how we hold things inside and grieve within our chests. Well said with this write. love phyl

Mohammad Yamin Date: 3/1/2013 10:10:00 AM Wow! An incredible write. I am impressed. Thanks for your kind appreciation of my Tanka Garden's Glamour, CDH. I feel flattered. Love -Mohammad

Eileen Manassian Date: 3/1/2013 7:30:00 AM Lovely, Constance. Very deep and full of meaning..AND you have created a new form? WOW! Hats off to you. :) Thanks for your comments on my poem. I appreciate it! :)

jack horne Date: 2/28/2013 3:13:00 PM just love this clever write, Constance. Hope you and the kitties are keeping warm x

Tim Ryerson Date: 2/28/2013 1:46:00 PM Stunning, elegant and absolutely beautiful...just like you are - Tim

craig cornish Date: 2/28/2013 1:32:00 PM Beautifully done and so good to let go but still store in a safe place.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 2/28/2013 7:38:00 AM This is sad yet beautiful Constance, you know I think we all have a chest of some description be it metaphorical or real yes we should let the pain fall luv xx

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 2/27/2013 8:29:00 PM This is sad. we all have things that we store away.That no one else must know, it's good to let them go. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

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