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Fall the Pain

the chest . . . aged, beautifully engraved and carved it resides in a corridor of my mind, locked my life story the journey, each chapter echoes of tears, melancholy memories of regrets and grieve and within this old chest I place them all the remorse, the despair, gloom and weeping emotions I open the lid and let them go, fall the pain . . . ______________________ February 26, 2013 Poetry/Verse/fall the pain Copyright Protected, ID 02-459-313-26 All Rights Reserved, 2013, Constance La France

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Kash Poet

Date: 5/6/2013 7:29:00 AM

hi Constance,rereading this beautiful poem....enjoyed again.

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/15/2013 8:34:00 AM

What a creative new form, and of course your words always stir the heart with deep emotion. As always, beautifully written. :)

Mathias Yakubu

Date: 3/15/2013 8:34:00 AM

Ripple effect... Always increasing Constance

Todd Borstad

Date: 3/14/2013 7:48:00 PM

I like this a lot. You truly have the mind and soul of a poet!

Todd Borstad

Date: 3/14/2013 7:46:00 PM

I like this a lot. The first poem I have read on this site with some depth. You truly have the mind and soul of a poet!

Jack Horne

Date: 3/6/2013 10:17:00 AM

enjoying these awesome words again, my friend. hope you and the kitties are well and warm. Mum just loves the canary!

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/4/2013 3:08:00 PM

this is wonderful Constance, truly beautiful, and yes i can so much relate to this...

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 3/4/2013 3:00:00 AM

This is very good. sometimes we have to let the pain go. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Kash Poet

Date: 3/2/2013 9:11:00 AM

to FAVS!

Kash Poet

Date: 3/2/2013 9:10:00 AM

This is really SUBLIME!!I come here for this calmness.Thanks for reading my poem.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/1/2013 10:11:00 AM

Wow this sure hits how we hold things inside and grieve within our chests. Well said with this write. love phyl

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 3/1/2013 10:10:00 AM

Wow! An incredible write. I am impressed. Thanks for your kind appreciation of my Tanka Garden's Glamour, CDH. I feel flattered. Love -Mohammad

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/1/2013 7:30:00 AM

Lovely, Constance. Very deep and full of meaning..AND you have created a new form? WOW! Hats off to you. :) Thanks for your comments on my poem. I appreciate it! :)

Jack Horne

Date: 2/28/2013 3:13:00 PM

just love this clever write, Constance. Hope you and the kitties are keeping warm x

Tim Ryerson

Date: 2/28/2013 1:46:00 PM

Stunning, elegant and absolutely beautiful...just like you are - Tim

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/28/2013 7:38:00 AM

This is sad yet beautiful Constance, you know I think we all have a chest of some description be it metaphorical or real yes we should let the pain fall luv xx

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 2/27/2013 8:29:00 PM

This is sad. we all have things that we store away.That no one else must know, it's good to let them go. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/27/2013 2:01:00 PM

Interesting Constance, hard to be cheery on a dreary day! Light & Love

Joseph May

Date: 2/26/2013 6:37:00 PM

great write Constance....from time to time we must open the lid and let pain go...thanks for stopping by

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2013 5:19:00 PM

you know, this poem itself is so sublime, it really fits the form named sublime. I'm happy to see this one today. one of the prettiest of my day.

David Williams

Date: 2/26/2013 11:11:00 AM

Constance my continuous thought is I love your writing ...David

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/26/2013 9:51:00 AM

Interesting work..If we could only put things that are unpleasant into a chest and let it go..Not so easily done..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/26/2013 9:22:00 AM

Nice write about a piece of antique furniture.

Betty Bolden

Date: 2/26/2013 8:00:00 AM

Good write..I just lost my momma in jan of this year..thank you for being out here.

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/26/2013 6:18:00 AM

This is an interesting form, I enjoy new forms to try, so this one I'll have to try, the Sublime form, hmmmm! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this morning, what an outstanding piece! You can surely write some amazing pieces, and this one is definitely one of those amazing poems my friend! Great Work!!