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Fall Leaves - From a Neighborhood Child

FALL LEAVES First color catches the eye Yellow tan brown Parented colors of sun and sky Bronzed gold-crusted The breeze seeming to sift A finest dust into the air to lift Above all a leafy hill The PILE! Raked by Brother, Bill Beside the bullet tree Mixed up by the breeze I’m buried clear up to my knees My first impulse was to run and jump atop To roll around Yet I flopped Rising quite soaked through By the still green heavy mass Of hidden October grass Still it’s time to roll around Looking upward At the twiggy web above the ground As a few stray leaves given up Flutter down Golden yellow milk chocolate brown The great round trunk of the bullet tree Reaches its fingers bare Standing alone so painfully The sky sorrows down With here and there a tattered black-fringed cloud I standing SHOUTING! sounding comically proud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/1/2011 10:40:00 PM
Such a vivid picture you paint here Dave. Love it! Lainie
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Date: 9/26/2011 9:19:00 AM
Read this listening to Bolero in the background and it gave a hypnotizing feel to the vision through the eyes of a child.Loved it!
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Date: 9/26/2011 5:54:00 AM
a total burst of the senses celebrating the wonder of the season, daver.. love this!..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 9/25/2011 2:49:00 PM
I sure could imagine this, Daver-- never experienced fall so this was such an enjoyable read for me :D thank you for writing this-- made me experience a bit of it :) hugs to you :D
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Date: 9/23/2011 4:58:00 PM
What a fun poem. Has me smiling. Thank you for sharing your creativity with us and for your kind comments. Have a good weekend. Karen
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Date: 9/22/2011 6:35:00 PM
a yummy delight of leaves described Daver with lovely essence of colors and hues.. wish we could all jump into the mounds of leaves that will be piling on walkways soon luv.. October is the month..a breathtaking beauty and flavor filled piece from Daver my friend..luv..
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