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Fall-Ing In Love

It started out as a harmless flirtation Nothing serious for three week’s of vacation But Fall’s cool breeze must have blown love in For we instantly connected, our souls akin Soon we were spending all of our days together And I knew he wasn’t just strutting his feathers He liked me for me and he was genuine too, I wasn’t his “toots,” his “babe,” or “hey you” And suddenly the world was a novelty, One I had never explored, and was eager to see All because he saw past my scarecrow disguise And pulled out the love, harvested inside 10/3/11

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/16/2012 6:47:00 PM
Congrats, Susan. Excellent. Nice going. luv Ralph
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Date: 1/16/2012 2:32:00 PM
Nicely written Susan. Congratulations
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Date: 1/16/2012 12:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Love Poem" contest Susan. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/15/2012 11:07:00 PM
SUSAN., CONGRATULATIONS!!! thank you for your wonderful and lovely poem.. Have fun in my next contest. always your one and only~ PD.
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Date: 1/15/2012 8:23:00 PM
congrats Susan on an exciting win for this exquisite piece of heartfelt poetry luv..
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Date: 1/15/2012 3:58:00 PM
Good grief, that one person again giving the crazy opinions. I LOVED those last few lines. Some of the best of the poem!! Is this fiction again, Susan or is it based on real life and your hubbie? Your title is awesome too. thanks so much for my second place win, susan. I don't know how I ever missed this poem of yours!!OR how I ever missed this contest. Congrats on your win win PD.
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Date: 12/22/2011 7:54:00 PM
could'nt understand the last two lines. when things are new you keep the old secret and bury the past. something you must have forgot. or just got bitten by a snake. T.S.
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Date: 11/18/2011 10:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Any Poem From Your First 100 On P S" contest Susan. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/17/2011 6:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your third place win with this amazing write! Lori
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Date: 11/17/2011 6:05:00 PM
Congrats Susan on third place win with this emotional piece luv..
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Date: 11/17/2011 11:58:00 AM
"The love harvested inside" Beautiful susan, Congratulations on your worthy three. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/17/2011 8:26:00 AM
Love those last two lines.....there is such a meaningful story in the simple truth of your unique explanation. Well done! Congrats!!
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Date: 11/17/2011 8:24:00 AM
I peek into the heart. Nicely written. Congratulations on your win Susan.
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Date: 10/27/2011 11:03:00 AM
Awww... this is beautiful.. your personal experience? Well, none of my "Woman" and "match" is my real story... I like your writings, Susan. Ill get back to read more 2mrw... now it's midnite here.. takecare :)
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Date: 10/12/2011 2:48:00 PM
yes oo....it got it right....
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Date: 10/12/2011 2:16:00 PM
A good uplifting write. If love can't lift you up then nothing can! I'm not entering any contests at the moment, but I wish you luck with this one. xoxo Robert.
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Date: 10/11/2011 8:25:00 PM
Smile, *^_^* “Tis Is As It Should Be When One Finds A Love Twined By The Vine of Destiny My Dear, Precious & Priceless Susan! *^_^* Your Beauty Expressed It Very Well & I For One Hope & Do Believe That What, `God's Heavenly Beauty,` Has Joined Together Than Not Even The Storms Upon The Shores of Timeless Time, Shall Be Able to Sever This Love * Very Lovely &, Thank You, for The Kind Visit; Much Appreciated!” === My Love, Always, Jasper *
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Date: 10/9/2011 12:25:00 AM
This looks like a winner to me....Great final 2 lines.
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Date: 10/5/2011 8:28:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry this morning Susan. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/3/2011 5:32:00 PM
Thanks Susan for a most interesting ANGER contest and your generous placement of my scribbles.......anger with self is a tricky topic and i have dabbled in it from time to time....this scribble probably got closer than others i have written.......thanks again...best wishes
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