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Fall Backwards

the color of leaves
signifies a
change in time

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Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 10/2/2008 10:56:00 AM

This is wonderful. I can see the changing of the leaves on a daily basis. The sight is so beautiful and breath-taking. This is very refreshing. Great job! ~Joseph

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/1/2008 1:13:00 PM

Ahhhh but not all places change time in this world. But unfortunately we have all the leaves changing colors so winter is around the corner. God Bless Phyl

James Foulk

Date: 10/1/2008 12:08:00 PM

how true this beautiful poem is. thank you for reading my an young lad's first ball game. if you look at the date 1922 and the caption at the bottom you will see that is was not me. i never had a releationship with my dad, until i was 18, so know how you feel also. this poem was about what i wished it would have been like, or just about some other kid somewhere. but thank you for reading my other poetry also and for your comments.

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/1/2008 7:39:00 AM

Must agree to loving your title. Adds even more to this already wonderful haiku. Love, Shar

Chitra Lakhera

Date: 10/1/2008 6:13:00 AM

Hello Deneen, this is very profound. A rational and very true message conveyed so simply. Take care. Love, Chitra

Brian Strand

Date: 10/1/2008 12:46:00 AM

Very appropriate title D-nyce.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Michael Torres

Date: 9/30/2008 10:55:00 PM

They are more precise then the weatherman. Letting you know it will get colder. A realization of a season that went by so fast. The smell of burning leaves and the sound of trick or treaters. Yes Deneen so few words in your beautiful poem but so many thoughts that become alive in yourself. Thankyou for simplicity and words that tell so many personal stories and bring back memories. God bless Michael and Janice

George Anos

Date: 9/30/2008 8:14:00 PM

Ahw!!! So few words and so rational and true! IT IS AN APT REMINDER.. Lest some forget. Take care. George

Michael Jordan

Date: 9/30/2008 7:33:00 PM

Deneen I reckon that is the truth - As for our little bird -it had not a feather on it when my daughter found it but we got some canned dog food and raised it and now it is a bird that will forever have its home here with us and in our hearts - We think it's a finch - It's just starting to get its adult feathers and once their in we'll be able to tell much better - God Bless

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 9/30/2008 5:04:00 PM

Yes change indeed Oh how I love the fall with all its colors! Great Haiku Laura :)

P Sheart

Date: 9/30/2008 4:00:00 PM

Yes hun, those leaves changing sure do mark a change in time. A indian eldor might say I have lived fourty seven moons upon the changing of the leaves.Here in Alaska the colors are blazing!!! Love Light Truth Patricia

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