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Fake Identity

Fake Identity Where blown the idols of falsehood Where were the sands of lies What unspoken expectation Prevented truth to be shown in her eyes Which island of doubt lay buried What agenda kept secret Which promise left unfulfilled and unfinished Masked the truth of her eyes In which moment did the edifice crumble To reveal the construction of dishonest words In what hour taken for granted Did the cosmetic fade in her eyes Where blown these idols of falsehood Where came these arid sands of lies Who’s unspoken expectation Ended the love in my eyes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/15/2008 2:48:00 PM
Colin my thought's rendered here in your magnificent words of not knowing someone's true intentions mixed in with dissapointment. I will comment on the rest of lyour works tommorrow. This is surely a deep thought creation touched with your cleverness. Thank you for your kind comments. Michael Torres
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Date: 11/15/2008 12:03:00 PM
this poem.. means alot to me, so well written x
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