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Fading Porch Light

Fading porch light lures with pale glow a circling moth, dull-beige and bare. As starlight ties vast sky in bows, I shy away from ruthless glare. Night holds secrets I’ll never know of bold ventures and starry-eyes of love; cast alone in shadows, I cry. The fading porch light dies. Unwelcomed guest, the moth again boasts of heights, flitting and spurring my desperate cries - through open window, lifting higher, whirring. Moth seeks light on wings now broken forever gone, my dreams unspoken… Entered in Silent One's Sadness Contest, 2/9/17 Originally for Chopped II Contest, written 11/4/14

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Date: 2/12/2017 4:15:00 PM
a very unusual and moving take on the theme and the first "moth metaphor" I have ever encountered. Congrats on your placement.
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Date: 2/12/2017 10:32:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Rhonda.
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Date: 2/12/2017 7:59:00 AM
This is quite beautiful-- one of those rare poems one can fall easily in love with!
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Date: 2/11/2017 12:37:00 PM
Such a poetic, poem - seriously, love the imagery and how it delivered the feel. Perfectly gray, and I did relate. Congrats on your 1st place! Poetry hugs, CayCay
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Date: 1/24/2015 2:38:00 PM
Love how moths thinks lights are the moon. Delightful Sonnet Rhonda, I'll smile at the next moth at the back door light, James :)
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Date: 11/19/2014 6:00:00 PM
Excellent treatment of the theme, great job with a sonnet, smooth and eerie edge you done good Rhonda.
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Date: 11/19/2014 2:36:00 PM
Just beautiful Rhonda...big congrats to you :)
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Date: 11/18/2014 12:01:00 PM
stunning sonnet Rhonda - many congrats:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 11/17/2014 8:39:00 PM
WOW! Rhonda what a jaw dropping write. I loved reading it, just wonderful. Congratulations on your well deserved win.
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Date: 11/5/2014 12:04:00 AM
Very beautiful sonnet , Rhonda, but so sad, I felt in my own heart so much sadness and pain as I read it. A 7 from me! Good luck in the contest! :) love and light! xxxx D.
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