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Eyes cut(Haiku)

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Eyes cut(Haiku)

Eyes cut,heart murder
Mouth assassin,leading where?
Someone tell,where to?

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  1. Date: 12/10/2010 5:21:00 AM
    A very powerful haiku, Charles! The eyes are the only gift given to silence the innocence we should cherish the deepness here,..p.d.

  1. Date: 11/1/2010 8:32:00 AM
    Deep senryu. .very deep!Celene.

  1. Date: 11/1/2010 8:22:00 AM
    I see you tried a Haiku and you have it right. A Haiku deals more with nature than anything else. Why of this I am not sure. God Bless Phyl

  1. Date: 11/1/2010 8:18:00 AM
    Deep one here Charles.. although Haiku is usually posted for Nature I can see the details of this piece as Haiku also.. great questions asked for the reader to ponder luv..