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Exposure, a Sijo

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Exposure, a Sijo

A glinting light fabricated under wilting hallows;
Yet darkness reigns as truth through fallow lanes runs hoarse and shallow;
So light as heaven's feather be the turns of ray and shadow.

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  1. Date: 6/1/2011 10:11:00 AM
    Many congrats Aron on notching up big win in ^Rick's contest with this beautiful imagery. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

  1. Date: 6/1/2011 6:30:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win in ^Rick's Sijo contest Aron. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/31/2011 7:43:00 PM
    Thank you all for your kind words of encouragement.

  1. Date: 5/31/2011 7:05:00 PM
    That last line is simply outstanding, Aron. Thinking outside the box with this one! A big congrats to you.

  1. Date: 5/31/2011 6:33:00 PM
    Congratulations on the win in the contest, Aron

  1. Date: 5/31/2011 4:03:00 PM
    So unusual, and delicate is this! Beautiful poem, Aron! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 5/31/2011 3:56:00 PM
    congrats Aron on your super win in Rick's contest with this awesome entry from the photo luv.. enjoy your top spot with luv..

  1. Date: 5/31/2011 3:06:00 PM
    Congrats to you !!!

  1. Date: 3/20/2011 7:58:00 AM
    beautfully worded and expressed thought in Sijo, Aron

  1. Date: 3/19/2011 11:27:00 PM
    that last line, wow, great metaphors.