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everyday i think of you
my love does you through and through
and when i turn to think of you
all emotions come into view
a sadness on my face is born
reliving the moment my heart was torn
and tears they still flood my eyes
the same as the moment i heard you died
but sadness is not the only thing
we had somethings that joy would bring
we had presents, cards and jealousy
so much we had, what did it mean
i still feel there can be no one else
and that God gave me you Himself
and somewhere out there on the otherside
beside the glory is my prize

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  1. Date: 6/8/2012 10:04:00 AM
    So you've experienced the bumps too! It's never easy but perhaps we learn somethingwhenit goes wrong.

    Situation Avatar The Situation
    Date: 6/9/2012 6:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    this bump is still bumping to this day.6/9/12
  1. Date: 2/3/2012 9:26:00 PM
    Beautiful poem, but sorry its about loosing someone!

  1. Date: 1/12/2012 5:13:00 PM
    Lovely sentiments...enjoyed !!

  1. Date: 1/12/2012 7:28:00 AM
    Lovely emotional poem you have penned T.S. Thank you for your comment. love phyl

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 5:49:00 AM
    That is so heartfelt and very wonderful- love so ultimate, Bless you, Bren :

  1. Date: 12/27/2011 9:28:00 PM
    OHH Situation...I didn't mean to insult you-I am so sorry. I just asked b/c of your name...I thought you got it from the show (I deleted the other comment-very sorry).

  1. Date: 12/26/2011 7:12:00 PM
    So emotional, give the reader a feeling of sadness for the loss.

  1. Date: 12/24/2011 8:52:00 PM
    A nice one... It's seems hard to let go... even when one has moved on...lovely... enjoy your holidays...p.d.

  1. Date: 12/24/2011 2:15:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your work..Sad to loose someone that you love especially to loose them to death...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 12/24/2011 11:02:00 AM
    Ah ! the longing for endless road...brilliant wrk...

  1. Date: 12/24/2011 8:13:00 AM
    Situation...Are you going to be writing more? I hope so! I guess you will be the one to have to decide if I'm 'good enough' to be edgy. I think I just may be. :) Looking forward to seeing more from you :)

    Situation Avatar The Situation
    Date: 12/24/2011 9:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    depends on the situation
  1. Date: 12/23/2011 7:25:00 PM
    a great piece! I can feel the longing here, beautiful

  1. Date: 12/22/2011 8:39:00 PM
    that's a lovely thought! full of hope and inspiration. I hope you're right :)

  1. Date: 12/22/2011 7:29:00 PM
    TS-Fantastic write here. What is going on w/ Susan? Is she ok? Thanks much, Natalie

  1. Date: 12/22/2011 4:03:00 PM
    your tearing my heart out.

  1. Date: 12/22/2011 6:23:00 AM
    such feeling and so profound, awesome. harry

  1. Date: 12/21/2011 7:30:00 PM
    TS. This poem is very heartfelt and feels so sad to me. however, i have to tell you, I strongly believe that with all the people in this big world, there are many souls that you can find happiness with, not just one!! thanks for your comment today. Luv,Andrea

  1. Date: 12/21/2011 2:03:00 PM
    In a way, this reminds me of "Honey" by Bobby Goldsboro. Good wording and rhyming here.

  1. Date: 12/21/2011 11:20:00 AM
    I enjoyed reading your poetry today TS. Wishing you a New Year filled with inspiration and the best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/21/2011 10:47:00 AM
    Didn't I read this poem yesterday? yes! Maybe you deleted it, then re-posted it? :) It is still a lovely poem. Merry Christmas! Hugs, catie