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Every Beautiful Thing

Lightning , rainbows, mountains, oceans, clouds
What seems to be random in creation, taunts us.
Dreamy, drifting, sometimes dangerous
every emotion, every sense, every molecule connected.

Plants, creatures, meteors, moving into forever.
Seeds, stars, flowers hold impossible answers.
Time, mystery, untold generations of life forms;
every beautiful thing destined to return.

 Suzanne Delaney

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Line Gauthier Date: 6/7/2021 9:51:00 PM The enumeration lines are so effective in this poem! There are so few words really yet a majestic feeling shines through splendidly ~ beautiful, Suzanne Login to Reply

Paris-Maree Boreham Date: 7/22/2018 1:13:00 AM Just wanted to write- I liked this, it's a lovely rejuvenating soul-lifting poem, well done Suzanne Delaney ! Login to Reply Suzanne Delaney Date: 7/22/2018 7:06:00 AM G’Day Paris~Maree: Lovely to see you and thanks for reading and commenting. Have a wonderful day. SuZ

Pashang Salehi Date: 2/8/2016 4:53:00 PM Hi Suzanne, this is a very beautiful poem, but the form you chose Ghazal is not. This is a beautiful free verse or something in that category. Poetrysoup has a great definition and example of ghazal. From the comments, I realized your poem was featured on the weekly site, congratulation on that as well. You may email me, gladly I'll discuss this further. Pashang Login to Reply Suzanne Delaney Date: 2/8/2016 6:05:00 PM Hi Pashang: When I first posted this I selected Free Verse as the form, but the ' jump glitch' here at the soup drops it to the next one in the list. I have only ever written one Ghazal and I know this is not it. Thanks for bringing my attention to it. I will go in and edit it to fix the mistake. Cheers, SuZ

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis Date: 1/29/2016 12:16:00 PM Suzanne, I went forthwith to your ghazal because I like that form and is not yet keen on writing it. Enjoyed the full gamut of your little gem. Login to Reply Suzanne Delaney Date: 1/30/2016 3:19:00 PM Thanks Iris: Appreciate you reading and commenting.

Skat A Date: 6/2/2015 11:21:00 PM HI SUZANNE, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love Login to Reply Suzanne Delaney Date: 6/13/2015 4:09:00 PM Hello Sweetie: Thanks always for your lovely comments. You make me feel part of the family here at PS. I have been away from here and found my way back. Hope to stay more often.Love, SuZ

Timothy Hicks Date: 10/21/2014 1:24:00 PM You expand the mind and inspire wonder in this beautiful piece. "What seems to be random in creation, taunts us." <<< you should look up the Fibonacci sequence... you'll find an amazing amount of order hidden within... it's very fascinating :) Login to Reply Suzanne Delaney Date: 11/8/2014 1:41:00 PM your suggestion re Fibbonacci tweaked a memory of something I had saved. Soupmail.

Donald Williams Date: 4/16/2014 2:05:00 PM Great job on this one, I feel a connection now :) Login to Reply

Peter Dome Date: 12/27/2013 6:49:00 PM Wonderful write well done. Pete. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/27/2013 9:01:00 AM did you see Peter Duggun's recent poem he wrote inspired by this one? your poem was both beautiful and inspiring!! (yeah, I almost didn't do the Xmas wedding poem either!!) Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 12/26/2013 6:16:00 PM We are stardust we are golden and we got to get ourselves back to the garden [Crosby Stills & Nash] ;) Light & Love Login to Reply

Johnny Rhinem Date: 12/26/2013 11:32:00 AM † I Too Have Long Since Believed, Sweet Beautiful Suzie, That Yes We Are All Connected No Matter What Created Form, This Beauty Should Be ? Here, A Wonderful Painting Somewhat Majestic, It's Melody: Set For Faves ˜ Happy Holidays ˜ My Love, Always, John Login to Reply