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Eternally

Not midnight breathing soft, not the pale kind, Your August bears eternally a kiss, Like mantle draped on hammock’s whirl of bliss That from eve's luster sweet ardor, I find, One drop to quell a thirsting quite refined With gentle rush to fling, to care, I bow. For love must express, my breath, to speak now, I am refreshed and always held enshrined. So come, dear one, we’ll walk the endless strands That melt into those eyes of aqua-blue, Yonder a dappled moon, near palm trees’ nest Jays of summer wheel above gleaming sands, When promises are faithful, always true Yes, only then shall we feel wholly blest! Rhyming Poem On Love- New Or Old Sponsor: Lu Loo Pre-written Submitted 3/11/2019 6/14/2014

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Date: 3/12/2019 10:47:00 AM
Congrats on your win, nette.
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Date: 1/21/2015 1:48:00 AM
Your poetry is always so enchanting and so beautifully expressed. You are truly gifted, Nette... Congrats on winning first place with this heartfelt write!
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Date: 1/18/2015 3:28:00 AM
COngratulations NEtte.. :)! I truly enjoyed the second stanza.. :)! much deserved.. :) weeeee! galing galing.. :)! musta?
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Date: 1/18/2015 12:40:00 AM
Truly romantic,congrats on the win nette...huggs
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Date: 1/17/2015 5:46:00 PM
Hi Nette, Congratulations! beautiful prose. "Yonder the tickled moon, near plm tree nest. Sounds like my Florida at night.
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Date: 1/17/2015 2:43:00 PM
Wow! You whirl and twirl in romantic bliss, Nette! Congratulations on this lovely win...much deserved. #7 Have a nice weekend. // paul
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Date: 1/17/2015 12:47:00 PM
Congratulations on this romantic entry taking top honors Nette!
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Date: 1/17/2015 12:41:00 PM
Oh so beautiful Nette - Many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 1/17/2015 10:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved top of the list first place win.
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Date: 1/17/2015 10:02:00 AM
Rhonda had a great eye on this choice. You knocked me out with this one nette. A Fav!
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Date: 1/17/2015 8:58:00 AM
Very beautiful, Nette. Congratulations on your 1st Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/17/2015 6:14:00 AM
WOW, Nette, this one had me "puckering up" in hope of catching a hint of the kiss on the wind. Well deserved top placement. A definite 7+++++
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Date: 1/17/2015 4:24:00 AM
Great romantic expressions, congrats on the win, nette
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Date: 6/30/2014 9:22:00 AM
Beautiful, grats on your win :)
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Date: 6/29/2014 6:56:00 PM
You have written so beautifully of those moments spent, suspended in sweet romance. Wonderful work, Nette! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 6/29/2014 6:27:00 PM
This poem is a sweet embrace of the night and its promise. Intriguing and seductive.
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Date: 6/17/2014 11:24:00 AM
I enjoy the rhyme and flow of this poem.
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Date: 6/17/2014 10:06:00 AM
This my friend is a winner. It is to me as I will now add this gem to my fav list!!! BBravo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 6/17/2014 7:18:00 AM
What a beautiful work of art Nette. Loved it from start to finish.
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Date: 6/16/2014 1:50:00 AM
Magnificant Nette, very well expressed, love your wording, blessings Carl
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Date: 6/15/2014 8:23:00 AM
beautiful write, Nette : )
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Date: 6/15/2014 8:08:00 AM
Magical! You have such a way with words Nette.
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Date: 6/15/2014 3:20:00 AM
Excellent. Very romantic write. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 6/14/2014 10:15:00 PM
You have been blessed with a beautiful pen nette..to walk the endless strands...hugs Tim
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Date: 6/14/2014 1:25:00 PM
Lovely romantic write Nette rich with imagery!
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