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Erase the Tempest?

Ink quills and vellum
     Sensitivities on rags
           The bard's monument







For Mr. Brian Stand's contest:
Poetry of the Noun

passionhaiku

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Sara Lokken

Date: 1/31/2010 8:07:00 AM

I am so glad you're still writing. This is amazing. Hugs*

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/27/2010 7:43:00 PM

This is just clever, John :) The bard would be touched :) Congrats on your win :)

Constance La France

Date: 1/27/2010 5:59:00 PM

Enjoy the glory..

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 1/26/2010 5:17:00 AM

Dear John, Congratulations on YOUR Honorable Mention in Brian's "Noun Haiku" Contest Superb Pen Always...HG

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/26/2010 4:27:00 AM

Brilliant wrting, John. Please be assured that we are all praying for your speedy recovery. You have been on my mind since I read the blog posted by your mother. You are one of my favorite "bards." Love and best wishes, Carolyn

Elaine George

Date: 1/26/2010 3:47:00 AM

Folklore and legends that have stood the test of time. Sensational Haiku of nouns, John. Congratulations on your win. I hope you will keep us up-dated on your own journey via blog here at the soup. Love, lainie

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/25/2010 10:06:00 PM

Great job! Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Poetry of the Noun" Contest! Peace, Audrey

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/25/2010 5:50:00 AM

Another great one by you , John. Wonderful. Congratulations! -Robert

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/25/2010 2:37:00 AM

Congratulations John, on placing in Brian’s Poetry of the Noun Haiku contest with these creative words. Your creativity is outstanding. Smiles, Dane Ann

Margaret Foster

Date: 1/25/2010 12:54:00 AM

Hi John, I see the writer at his old fashioned desk. good work...Margaret

Linda Witt-King

Date: 1/24/2010 3:21:00 PM

Really good John. Great image. Congratulations! Linda

John Freeman

Date: 1/23/2010 4:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your mention John. Sincerely, Moses

John Freeman

Date: 1/23/2010 4:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your mention John. Sincerely, Moses

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/23/2010 1:55:00 PM

well, what the heck, Heck! I never even saw this one yet. It's really good. Congratulations!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/23/2010 1:45:00 PM

Oh I like this and I see it won high honors. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/23/2010 11:15:00 AM

I was blown away by this amazing haiku, ....not the least surprised to see it among the winning poems! Congrats, John....so well deserved! ~ Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/23/2010 11:10:00 AM

Congrats John on your winning poem in Brian's Poetry of the Noun contest.. wonderful words to your entry and well deserved win.. great blogs from u also .. enjoy both ... luv.. Linda-Marie..